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Please check out my first track 'Strumble' and post your comments
its made with fruityloops and i didnt use any fx
This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Styrotinnitus: 18-02-2004 12:58.
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18-02-2004 12:36 |
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cey 
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im seeing glow sticks and base heads on this one, hehe, its got those old skool chimes.,,its quite slow, but it suits i think,. overall a good sound, the bass is almost non-existent though, cud only here 2 little wobbles at the end of each bar i think, quite ones at that.. it wud pay 2 give more attention to that, the melody is good..y didnt u use effects?.were u planing to run it through logic or somthing>?strange, i think u shud use sum effects, u dont have to rape em, subtle is good too, good job though man, enjoyed it 
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18-02-2004 17:28 |
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thechronic
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Cool panning in the intro, I quite fancy that 
The drums sound nice, not the average dnb sound (especially the kick) but the whole kit sounds good and fits the track very well.
Rave stabs and conga loops are not really my style, but fits the track as well.
cey is right in that the track can use a good bassline, I miss that too.
The rave organ could be a bit sharper and more up front. Sound fx are OK!
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15-07-2004 01:24 |
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Surya
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Very slow indeed. And a lot of kicks
Makes it sound more like breakbeat than DnB...
The hoover is quite nice, the conga's are ok, but that other stab sounds out of key or something, making it sound quite messy and weird. Maybe you should process that sample to filter out unwanted frequencies...
2/5
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