Please check out my new track 'Utopia , (dubstep)' and post your comments here!
hi there , not bin on here 4 ages , just bin working on dubstep at the mo , see some others put some on , so , just thought i`lled put 1 of mine up , made on raeson 4 , let me know what u think !!!!!
heres a mix i done of my tracks !!!!
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This is really nice mate. The melodies during the first section are really sweet. I would have loved a whole tune of that tbh.
Second section... yep, nice stuff again. I can tell your production skills are progressing because this is sounding really crisp and clear. I can't hear any frequency conflicts at all.
I love the bass edits too. It's very tight and the reverb is just right.
The only minor criticism I can come up with is the lack of focus during the second section. It needs something to dominate and guide it - perhaps a more focal bassline. The beats could be a bit more active too. They are a tad too simple for me.
Overal tho, a wicked tune. Enjoyed.
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20-08-2008 20:23
CLARKFADER unregistered
thanks tomos mate , yeah ive had really good response from this , some people really like it , i was going to give up on it at 1 point , but got my shit together and finished it , i have now had it played on 2 dubstep radio stations !!!!!!
Originally posted by CLARKFADER
i have now had it played on 2 dubstep radio stations !!!!!!
Nice one!
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wikid dubstep track. i kno dubsteps a bit more sparse wit the beats an that but i rekon havin the kick an snare jus on the 1st an 3rd beats of the bar is a bit borin, id jus hav a bit more variation in the kicks. intros well gud tho kinda thing i like for an intro be4 it drops into sum dirty bassline. nice 1.
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nice atmospheric intro....pad is really nice....everything is sounding nice and crisp here....nice reverb on the clap, fits just right..i know dubstep is supposed to be minimal but id alter the main kick/ snare pattern a bit..gets a little boring after a while...nice sfx throughout and the arrangment/ structure is nice....bass is nice and deep....maybe turn the wobble bass a little bit..its a little overpowering....overall mix is pretty good....really good track overall....not a big dub-step fan myself but this is pretty good and well put together....nice work.
Glass clear mixdown. Really nice relaxed atmosphere.
Good choice of instruments. Tune doesn't bore one sec. Good percussion and bleeping fx things to fill it all up.
Good stuff!
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22-08-2008 15:55
CLARKFADER unregistered
cheers battle , i think some people need to get there ears tested , as they have rated lower , and ive had no complants about the production side n shit , so im a bit miffed
at the rating again
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Fuck yea! First drop is super fat. Great sounds man, i love a good dubstep as much as dnb - I would buy this one mate.
I've listened to it a few times, and perhaps the snare could thwack out a bit louder with a bit of compression in the first section (1:35 - 1:50)... i dunno. It sounds as loud as it did in the intro section. Tell me what you think!!
Awesome vocal samples man, love the one at the start especially. Sounds sick!
Bass: best bit, awesome sub & mid. Well fukken done!
Best track ive heard on .be for a while. Cheers!
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23-08-2008 11:12
CLARKFADER unregistered
hey , thanks 4 your comments mate !!!!!!! i think the snares as loud as it should be , i was uming and arrhhing over the track 4 too long anyway , soundz alright to my thou , but everyone different !!!!!!!!
IMO the drums could use a little more presence - especially the snare.
I'm diggin' the wobble and the effects.
This sounds very spacey and industrial, but I feel as though it needs a pad in the background and maybe something melodic and catchy. You'll have to understand that I know nothing about dubstep besides what I've heard on here so this is totally an outside opinion - consider me the masses of ignorant sheep that would call this "techno." i.e. the people you'll have to impress because they get dubstep (or whatever your style may be).
i really like that wobble when it kicks in, but the track def needs more presence at that point - some kind of pad, maybe one of those epic reverbed long decaying "boom" kinda explosion noises. (sorry not very technical on that one).
dubstep...sweet. its a genre im really growing into.
again, as is my frequent gripe on here, it takes too long to get going and doesnt capture the listener as quickly as i'd like.
when it does come the beat is sparse, maybe too much so, but a good fat bass is never a bad idea.
im still not grabbed too much by it, sounds like it could be on an ibiza chillout mix cd or similar.overall i think the track doesn't grow anywhere and would be siutable as incidental music on tv or radio. if i was you id rip the basss out of it and delte everything else and probably start again. having said that, some of my dubstep efforts have been shocking
27-08-2008 17:29
CLARKFADER unregistered
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Originally posted by rivalfaction
dubstep...sweet. its a genre im really growing into.
again, as is my frequent gripe on here, it takes too long to get going and doesnt capture the listener as quickly as i'd like.
when it does come the beat is sparse, maybe too much so, but a good fat bass is never a bad idea.
im still not grabbed too much by it, sounds like it could be on an ibiza chillout mix cd or similar.overall i think the track doesn't grow anywhere and would be siutable as incidental music on tv or radio. if i was you id rip the basss out of it and delte everything else and probably start again. having said that, some of my dubstep efforts have been shocking
this track has gone from 84% to 61% !!!!!!
mate u`r rating r "shocking" , and r not a fair relection on this tune , no one else has any "GRIPE" about the intro , " read the reviews " !!! u obviously dont feel music too much , do u ???? and thats" MY GRIPE" with puting my tunes on this site , too many people ruining ratings , when there just not listening , or dont have a clue about music !!!!!!!!
This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by CLARKFADER: 27-08-2008 17:58.
heard this one before, u tweaked it yeah? sounds wicked! 
