the first thing that i noticed was some of the panning was a bit to far to one side or the other. nice melodies, id want the synths an basslines soundin a bit dirtier tho. maybe fill out the drums a bit more 2. not bad tho. nice 1. Timmi
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I only have been creating music for a little over a year there are some things that I need to work on.Thanks for the review.
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21-08-2008 02:28
CLARKFADER unregistered
not sure about this 1 , the pad and bass on the intro needs turning up , the beat comes in too loud !!!! dont like the high distorted synths , dont make any sence to me , and a bit too loud , but thats only my opinion !!!!!!! could be a better track , needs something different !!!!!
anyway mate , not tyring to knock u`r shit , u can improve on this 1 !!!!!!!!
melodys and pads in intro are nice....drums defo need another layer to fill em out a bit more...main kick and snare are come through the mix well...but maybe turn the snare down a little....structure is ok but a little random at time....not sure about the synth-type sound coming in around the 2:00 minute mark.....some of the drum edits dont really fit either...really not keen on that high-pitched synth, doesn't fit at all....sub is nice and warm. not a bad track overall...jus seems like a things dont really fit into it very well....good work
Drums don't roll, snare sounds like a clap.
Pads are too much to the left. Bass has a weak low end. Synth that comes in at 58" is simply off tone and doesn't fit in the trance atmosphere. Drum variations after 2' sound extremely robotic and uninspired. When the drop comes in there is a nasty tail from the synth audible.
The whole thing is pretty repetitive after a while. A lot of the sounds seem to be very standard presets. The mixdown is muddy, fails to sparkle and it sounds a bit thin.
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