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Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
Rogue Ai


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Please check out my new track 'Cybernetica' and post your comments here!

This is a tech step track that has some great filter automation. Created in Reason 4.

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20-08-2008 04:49 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
Timmi Timmi is a male
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the first thing that i noticed was some of the panning was a bit to far to one side or the other. nice melodies, id want the synths an basslines soundin a bit dirtier tho. maybe fill out the drums a bit more 2. not bad tho. nice 1. Timmi

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21-08-2008 02:07 Homepage of Timmi
Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
Rogue Ai


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I only have been creating music for a little over a year there are some things that I need to work on.Thanks for the review.

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21-08-2008 02:28 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
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not sure about this 1 , the pad and bass on the intro needs turning up , the beat comes in too loud !!!! dont like the high distorted synths , dont make any sence to me , and a bit too loud , but thats only my opinion !!!!!!! could be a better track , needs something different !!!!!

anyway mate , not tyring to knock u`r shit , u can improve on this 1 !!!!!!!!
21-08-2008 12:54
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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melodys and pads in intro are nice....drums defo need another layer to fill em out a bit more...main kick and snare are come through the mix well...but maybe turn the snare down a little....structure is ok but a little random at time....not sure about the synth-type sound coming in around the 2:00 minute mark.....some of the drum edits dont really fit either...really not keen on that high-pitched synth, doesn't fit at all....sub is nice and warm. not a bad track overall...jus seems like a things dont really fit into it very well....good work

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21-08-2008 19:23 Homepage of Sephiroth
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Drums don't roll, snare sounds like a clap.
Pads are too much to the left. Bass has a weak low end. Synth that comes in at 58" is simply off tone and doesn't fit in the trance atmosphere. Drum variations after 2' sound extremely robotic and uninspired. When the drop comes in there is a nasty tail from the synth audible.
The whole thing is pretty repetitive after a while. A lot of the sounds seem to be very standard presets. The mixdown is muddy, fails to sparkle and it sounds a bit thin.

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22-08-2008 15:43 Homepage of BattleDrone
Binary Havoc Binary Havoc is a male
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Reviewing as I listen so excuse the live comments

Really totally great pad sound in the intro

Gets going far to quickly for me without any defined build up

And then at 1:00 the synth just goes bananas Teeth

out of tune and totally too hot in the mix

much better when it goes away

but wait...............it comes back again

I really dont like that synth at all

Maybe it's personal taste but it ruins the whole tune for me





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23-08-2008 02:38 Homepage of Binary Havoc
Phalanx Phalanx is a male
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Yo, I'm with BH on this one, that discordant synth really ruins the track for me.

I think a better snare sound would improve the track.

Can't really say too much because the lead sounds are really distracting.

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23-08-2008 22:28 Homepage of Phalanx
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