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Uberchile
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Registration Date: 14-05-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Envy' and post your comments here!
Where there are virtues there are vices.
One for the other side of my album.
much darker than my usual stuff but then evil things usually are.
Big thanks to any one who votes reviews or listens to my track.
I made the evil fx samples myself. i could make a pack of such things if needed/ asked .
Thanks again
-UC-
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16-08-2008 22:57 |
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carmod
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Registration Date: 04-07-2008
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those beeps are way too loud in the mix i think,kinda ruin the song for me.
that synth part at around 1:40 is nice
i like the drums aswell, maybe u could beef them up a bit tho
song could do with sum small refinement
good work overall tho
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16-08-2008 23:04 |
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c_ctrl
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Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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I think this tune would benefit from being slightly heavier, at the moment it has the evil touch but doens't push it far enough and sounds a bit restrained in my ears. I like some of the beats, especially the one in the breakdown, nice work. Love the ambience aswell, pretty cool sounding. The beeps don't sit right tho maybe they need to be quieter or something.. maybe pushed back in the mix with a little reverb..? Like it tho, nice one.
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17-08-2008 19:45 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Not bad but it's lacking heaviness atm. It's sounding more like trance than dnb. The kick and bass both sound too high-pitched. You should deffo think about lowering them and making them sound bigger and dirtier (i.e., layering them, adding a touch of stereo panning, adding distortion, maybe some modulation too). Same with the beats.
The melodies are pretty good. They seem to flow nicely and the transitions are smooth. In fact, melodies seem to be your big strength, which is good.
The tune definitely needs filling out - needs more layers and textures. It's a little flat at the mo. You need to find a way of beefing up the overall sound - perhaps by using some compression and, like I say, more layering.
Good toon overall tho.
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20-08-2008 21:01 |
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Binary Havoc
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Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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EZ chile
Long time since man
where you been????
Nice beats, nice mix, snare a bit weak for me and kick a bit housy
cool melodies again man....Im so jealous of your melodies man. Specially that distant rave synth man.....wicked
Not particularly dark but yeah enjoyed this a lot
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23-08-2008 02:52 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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quite like the intro, beeps are way too loud tho and the pads could use a little boosting....drums are quite nice and rolling, maybe beef up the snare a little....drop lacks impact imo....not enough low-end to keep it heavy....synth around 1:34 is pretty nice....again could use beefing....structure and arrangment is pretty good...the track changes a lot...just things need beefing up more...its not as in-your-face as it could be....not bad tho..
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23-08-2008 14:39 |
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