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cey 
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Registration Date: 27-01-2004
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17-02-2004 19:44 |
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cey
Producer
Registration Date: 27-01-2004
Posts: 35
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forgot to mention, about 95% of these sounds are from the samplebank on DnB.be.....ni(e 
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17-02-2004 20:01 |
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Aztek
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Registration Date: 25-01-2004
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I like it, definitely the right idea man. You got some really ill amen breaks with some sick basslines. nice samples too.
keep it up!
:rasta 
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18-02-2004 02:57 |
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ReaferSlime
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Registration Date: 11-12-2003
Posts: 26
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it was worth the wait althou ososloe withe intro
please review my work i got this one "crooked" but you have to use the link on the forum page to get to it
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18-02-2004 03:10 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Nice long intro, really gave me the idea that something really banging was coming up 
That hihat line throughout the whole intro is wonderful
It comes and goes, gets mutilated a little, then reappears again, still heightening the expectations 
When the drop finally appears it doesn't give the bang I was expecting all the time, you'll need to make the amen more upfront, give it some bite and some hard compression. Think you have to boost some around 3kHz to make it stand out more. And definitely compress it here to push up the overall volume.
The bass line is very nice and the amen switching too!! That 'hey' sample is great, fits in very well I think.
One last thing: you got some dangerous low frequencies in the track, I can hear the membrane on my headphones clicking when the kick drum is filtered in from the bottom. Roll off the very low frequencies!!
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18-02-2004 17:01 |
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cey
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Registration Date: 27-01-2004
Posts: 35
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that is a bonus review, no what u mean about the dangerous bass, thats due 2 my ignorance on freq etc.. i did give sum compression 2 the beats but its only shitty reason 2.5 compression, ill run it through soundforge or something,..the drop too, i think its a bit rushed and like u said a bit anti-climax or something, thanks alot again man, made my day hah
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18-02-2004 17:15 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Like the tune. 2:20 opens gates of hell.
But the biggest issue is the sound, as always off course.
Maybe you can save each loop (by muting others instruments) in reason seperately, and then put them in some sort of sequencing or eq-tool. Should help.
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18-02-2004 19:38 |
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rorschach
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Registration Date: 24-08-2003
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the tune itself is good indeed, i oive the quite dark feeling it has. Everything is nice in place, except for the bassline i think, which is sometimes pushed away by the beat.
And you can hear from miles away it was made with Reason, but that's a sound issue and there are ways to solve it..
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19-02-2004 10:10 |
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Qbit
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Registration Date: 14-11-2003
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i like the overall idea, but the tune itself isn't all that. I mean, you have good hooks in your head, good harmony but the sound is just very poor. I suggest to use more professional samples (HQ) and use mor EQ on your sounds. It's not an easy thing to learn, but you might wanna take the time for it.
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19-02-2004 16:48 |
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CH3M!K
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 19-01-2003
Posts: 127
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it got my heartbeat running
sound is indeed a bit uncontrolled, and the drums u use before the amen are too low quality...
Otherwise, i really like the random samples (esp the hey hey thing)
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19-02-2004 19:08 |
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Dave_Akuma
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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yeah, i'd say the main drawback of this tune is the mixdown/mastering...got some really good ideas...the hi hat at the beginning is really dj-friendly, makes the tune easier to mix...oh hell yeah, love the amen mash-ups...the reeces are nice too...except for the mastering/mixdown, this is a nice tune so far...to get some tips on mixdown/mastering, you might wanna check out dogsonacid.com (even tho there's a lot of haters there, they have some good threads about production and stuff in the grid) and on www.mw-dnb.com---really helpful stuff
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19-02-2004 20:56 |
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stino
Player
Registration Date: 13-07-2003
Posts: 308
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there's something in it, but like said above, decent mastering is needed...
keep idea-ing man! try to work it out some more and take it to the next level
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20-02-2004 11:37 |
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cey
Producer
Registration Date: 27-01-2004
Posts: 35
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ur all rite,. im gonna try and put it thru logic plat..it takes so long tho man, im such a lazy boy...hehe, and dont no enuf about rewire etc.im in the process of changing the whole track just in reason, a different drop, experimenting with warpy basslines.,compression, eq and what not.hope ppl will give it another go ?
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thanks 4 all the posotive, and the negatives..bad news is better than no newz
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21-02-2004 03:12 |
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..hehe,. hope u enjoy, it sounds much better thru headphones, i no shit about mastering etc, so pls bare with me, try ur best 2 c the gd in it, and pls pls pls----REVIEWS!?
shake it bebe
