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Suspender
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Registration Date: 06-08-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Zé Ruela' and post your comments here!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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11-08-2008 01:08 |
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c_ctrl 
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Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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Not really sure what to make of this one mate. The bass is really needing a lot of work, it needs variation in the actual B-line not just the automation. The drop is non existent atm and the drums are lacking in variation aswell. There isn't much else to comment on really.
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11-08-2008 01:19 |
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carmod
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Registration Date: 04-07-2008
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intro needs a lot of work its way too simple. thought u coulda been a bit more creative with the cybals at the start aswell. bass line is in need of variation n sounds a small bit thin. drums r a bit simple n r practically just the sum thing for the whole song. try varying them a bit to give the song a bit more rythym n speed. no drop at all in the song. u should try work on building ur song up to a point wer it suddenly explodes. u could try make the song a bit more layered aswell to add atmosphere, seemed a small bit bare.
neway keep on at it
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11-08-2008 02:40 |
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xevex
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Registration Date: 06-08-2007
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ok i like the cymbal thing you got goin on(after the "drop"). i guess the problem i have with the track is the extreme repetition of the bass AND the lack of any other melodic or harmonic aspect. 2:16 melody change works sort of. I guess what you really need is to add a few more elements. The intro doesn't have to just be the same bass of the whole tune. Maybe the intro should have no bass, more atmosphere, and more variation overall. drums sound alright. this is a good point in development to be where you have the bare bones of the song to really start adding more sounds and changing the bass. not bad 
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11-08-2008 03:41 |
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Timmi
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Registration Date: 04-11-2007
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on this 1 u wana watch the panning that uve got goin on in the bass sounds a bit odd at the beginning. drums sound alright tho, i think this needs alot of work, the bass sounds better at around 3 mins tho. I think it needs more melody wise in the intro 2 + the break in the middle. not a bad effort tho. nice 1. Timmi
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12-08-2008 14:41 |
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sam beckett
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Registration Date: 03-09-2008
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drums are not varied enough and sound empty try sticking some breaks in there cause they just sound to wimpy on there own. the hat plays the same pattern all the way through the track wich makes it really boring. get a vst like instajungle and run your drums trough that itll give you some ideas. zoom in and start playin with 16th notes. also the drums are all the way in the back and the synths are just flooding the whole track. the idea is to get the lot to work together. obviously your a begginer but dont give up, it comes with time and hard work.
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03-09-2008 17:27 |
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