always try to finnish what u started. Sometimes its hard but I always try to finnish what I start, I have dozens of tracks that r finnished but arent worth posting here...anyway...to your track...Intro- sick, but try to turn that eerie background up a bit. I love that bass man, really scary hehe. Hasnt got much lows though. Try to layer it with a woble sub with the same oscilating frequency and see what it sounds like. The snare sounds too flat for me. Add some attack to it and make it sharper is my advice. Kick is fine, maybe too club-ish. Pretty nice track, big up for the bass edits. Definitely worth finnishing. Hope this review helps a bit. cheers man and hope to hear more tracks from u in the future.
Yeah man I'd say get this one finished mate, It's sounding nicely dark. I reckon it just needs a little more variation in it, a couple of new sounds introduced and you could be on to a decent tune. Intro is great btw!
A nice start with some cool sounds and textures but it never really gets going. The snare doesn't have enough low-end and the hi hats are very, very quiet. wrm suggested adding some attack to the snare but I think it's already got too much. It sounds too snappy and attacking to me. I do like the modulation on the bassline tho. That's deffo the strong part of the tune. Melodies are basic but solid. The tune needs filling out but like I said, it's a decent start.
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ez mate, yeah vibe is nice on this one, i'd say yes go ahead and finish it! really what u want to start doin now is just layering and layering on all levels, cuz it really needs it, so get a lot more body to that beat fill out with hihats, more prominent shuffles, loops etc snare needs a bit of low end, get a lot more fx in there to compliment that eerie vibe u got goin, u really need sum sub underneath as well.
Diggin the intro, nice n atmospheric. Always lovin a filtered in break
Mix isnt brilliant, beats are a bit overpowered by the gated synth at times. Filtering on the synth could be better defined too - Starts off very lively and then the cutoff pretty much drops to zero for the latter aprt of the tune. Try editing your automation to get the tweaks a bit more in time.
Think the kick drum pattern clashes with the bass line as well sometimes.
