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philbee philbee is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Blowfish(soon To Be Finished)' and post your comments here!

ez,people
new track from me,
been on this a day so eq probably lacking
but maybee not!you be the judge,
techy roller from me,dark edge to it,
feel free to- cuss to the ground/heap praise
all feedback recieved gracefully as per.
made on the usual..blah blah.blah
big up all the dotbe massive

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08-08-2008 23:13 Homepage of philbee
Travis_Huckins Travis_Huckins is a male
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I was thinking when the bass was ever going to filter up. But It never did. I wonder how it would be if when you would finish it. Drums are great. I don't really know what else to add, but this is really great. I haven't making music long enough to be much help to you but I can produce music pretty well. I hope this would help. I hope that the finished version wouldn't just cut out.

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09-08-2008 07:55 Homepage of Travis_Huckins
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Nice intro man. Not liking the kick. Sounds too thin and has too highs for my taste. The bass sounds good, could be a tad louder though. Snare sample is fine, but still the sound could be improved with a sharper snare sample (just my personal taste). Pretty nice roller Philbee, not the best I heard from yah but sounds good. Big up

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09-08-2008 10:06 Homepage of wrm
Gregg Gregg is a male
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Yeah, in the intro there goes something with the kick that makes it sound klicky. As a deeper kick would fit better just leave the klicky part in the higher frequencies out. Just as you actually did later in the tune I just noticed… ^^

The percussions with the drums sound good, digging these! I’d put more accent on the high end…make your cymbals/hats sound more defined and clear.

The tune seems not to have a real melody but is so full of atmospheric sounds that there really is no need for one.

So yeah good work, just make a view elements sound more defined and watch out that some others are not getting drowned by the huge amount of reverb you are using.

Cheers man!
09-08-2008 12:09 Homepage of Gregg
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez philbee - nice dark atmos in the intro likin that Big Grin very nice indeed! cool percussion as well there

yeah kick is a bit high endy, either eq it out and or layer sumthin a bit lower with it? still beat rolls really well as they do in all ur tunes Wink

like when the sub comes in haha dark roller in the house! would be nice to see some more synth bass filter action goin on top of that on the low mids Bigup

really likin the direction this is heading matey - good work!

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09-08-2008 12:18 Homepage of Ketz
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Thats a hell of a lot of atmosphere in one track! Sounds wicked, really deep. I reckon it could it could do with a more defined bassline tho or something that that sounds really evil.. A distorted twisty transformer type sound, you know what i mean. A HOOK! thats what I'm trying to say. Can't fault anything else in it really.. maybe layer a deeper kick but i do like hearin a little beater click on that kick you got now. Sweet work mate!

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09-08-2008 19:57 Homepage of c_ctrl
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i ent well in2 this kind o dnb fx dnb i call it but i can apreciate it from a production piont of veiw, i hav heard of sum of u stuff so its no suprise that this tune is hi quallity (did u do sum demo tracks for fl around ver.5) the 'fx' r great on the headphones. luv the drums well punchy kick n they just roll. i got a lot learn about how to hav thoose diff fx all gel together and fly around the stero spectrum but still stick to the tune N E help wud be apreciated. not a lot more i can say really. eq sounds gud to me.
10-08-2008 13:16
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Deffo agree with the others about the clicky kick, try taking out the highs. Also, I'd add some low-mid to the snare cos that is very clicky too. Lovely work with bongos and hi hats. Gets a little repetitive after a while tho. Sub is nice and full. I reckon it'd sound even better if you layered another bass on top with lots of low-mid. It needs to growl a bit more. Lots of cool, atmospheric FX here, as per from you. Nice tune but it's lacking a hook, like c_ctrl mentioned.

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10-08-2008 18:13 Homepage of Tomos
Timmi Timmi is a male
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yo man, i like all the sound effects in this, got a dark edge indeed. not bad 4 a days work 2! maybe layer a really gritty soundin synth over the top of that bass to give it some interestin sounds in the mids n the highs. the drums sound v quiet need beefin up a bit, but as its only a days work im guessing ull be able to sort that out. nicce 1. interested to hear the finished article. timmi

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