 xevex - Transformation |
xevex
Producer
Registration Date: 06-08-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Transformation' and post your comments here!
this one jumps back n forth, weird structure. maybe other issues too. comment as harshly as ya like
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05-08-2008 05:06 |
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fade doni
Sexy Tourist
Registration Date: 22-07-2008
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Aargh, I was writing a cool review and then Firefox died.
K, what I was saying: Nice nice nice!!!! I really like the first part of the track. Playful and nice structure imo.
Bassline that comes in 'round 2.13 sounds too farty (hehe, sorry for the stupid description 
) and untill 3.39 the track feels a bit boring and standard. After that point (2.13 min) untill the sudden ending it flows well and fits better with the first part of the track.
The ghostsounds in the beginning are really well chosen, also the high bell 'ting' fits nicely. Maybe some pitch variations in that pattern during the middle part of the track.
Nice sub in the break before 2.13.
Overall the track has a really good athmosphere and I would certainly play this on a party exept for the 2.13 till 3.39 part: has too much 'stops' for me and therefor doesn't flow that well imo.
And has the track really ended at 4.06? 'Cause I expect and would like more 
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05-08-2008 14:27 |
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RonaldoVetro 
Ronaldo Vetro
Registration Date: 27-07-2008
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Nice intro.
Nice editing,nice sounds...
Nice track.
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RonaldoVetro has been banned from this site for cheating. Ignore his reviews, they may not be his own opinion but may have been copy/pasted from other members' posts!
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05-08-2008 14:29 |
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Timmi
Atmos T (aka Timmi)
Registration Date: 04-11-2007
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i see what u mean by saying it jumps back and forth, and is dodgy structure wise, particularly in the 1st 1/2. I think with this track u need to take out your best 16 bars and then build on it, develop it and then gradually introduce different melodies rhythms etc. the mix + eq sounds ok, just let down by slightly random melodies and structure.
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05-08-2008 17:10 |
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c_ctrl
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Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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Yeah I think this jumps a little too much. There are some pretty solid lines tho, if you tried you could probably use this tune as a sketchpad and make three different tunes out of al the parts in this one lol. Sounding nice in parts tho, liking the drum edits in places. nice one
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05-08-2008 18:16 |
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xevex
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Registration Date: 06-08-2007
Posts: 45
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hey thanks for the opinions expressed and advice given...peace
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06-08-2008 22:34 |
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coddy
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Registration Date: 25-10-2007
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i notice straight away that this sounds alot more "right" than three posted after this one it is much louder
very oldschool junglist feel to the sequenceing
you need a real solid bassline which would bring the whole tune together.
cool as sounds tho
keep it up
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08-08-2008 05:50 |
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cut the first break in half so it comes in quicker, nice dark tune. Diggin the use of cymbals and atmosperes. Love the off-beat structure and pauses though...definately a head rattler!! WOOT!
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09-08-2008 18:40 |
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