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BESHAI 
Beshai
Registration Date: 17-05-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Heaven's A Lie' and post your comments here!
Made in cubase. Zeta, trilogy.
all comments criticism are welcome.
not sure where i want to take this song.
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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02-08-2008 20:39 |
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mescA
...aka zepH....
Registration Date: 02-08-2008
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wow, i like this song very much.
the bassline is really dope, and i very liked the intro. didn't know that trilogy has so great bass sounds. and for some reason, i find the title of the track is really a good choice. it fits it really with the pad in the song in it. don't know if other people think the same, but that's my opinion. i'm looking forward to hear some new tracks of you, keep the bassline alive 
and sorry for my bad english here 
have a nice time
mescA
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02-08-2008 20:59 |
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RonaldoVetro
Ronaldo Vetro
Registration Date: 27-07-2008
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I think this track is a little bit childish.
I don´t really like the synth sounds.
It could be a lot more dirty.
You should use more distortion.
I'm don't mean to be rude,but that's what i think.
The quality of the sound it's ok!
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04-08-2008 19:49 |
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Sephiroth
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intro is very trancey, melodys are lush...synth sound is quite nice if a little dry, could use more distortion to it for some more presence..maybe a better programmed pattern too.
build up to the drop is good..drums nice and rolling, good edits too..keeps things fresh....sub is pretty deep, could use a bit of a boost to really get the sub working, more distortion on the bass would really gritty this up...overall sound quality is pretty good. that same kick fill is over-used a bit too much...different drum variations are needed...nice track overall...enjoyed this one, good work indeed!
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04-08-2008 23:23 |
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Timmi
Atmos T (aka Timmi)
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yo man not a bad tune this, i think the drop needs more impact. the intro sounds like it is in a different key to the main bassline i think if u transpose the bassline melody up a semitone it'll fit in better with the rest of the track. Melodies + mix sounds good, just needs a bigger impact. nice 1. Timmi
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05-08-2008 01:48 |
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c_ctrl
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Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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This ones a deep layer of sound, really well thought out. As far as I can hear everythings working with each other pretty well, maybe a few hairy moments where a note clashes but other than that sweet work. Little bit trancy but i think we're all allowed to indulge every now and then. Adding some more dirt and drive to some sounds could really change the way this tune comes across, could make it a lot more dark and evil..worth giving it a go mate, if only to see if you like it more.
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05-08-2008 18:39 |
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rivalfaction
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Registration Date: 06-08-2008
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hey
decent tune man
any chance i could remix it?
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07-08-2008 18:05 |
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coddy
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pro sounding
wish i could get my drums tight like that
definitely a professional sounding tune
good to hear a solid bassline and over all melding of the elements in the tune
not often you hear one of this quality on here
BOh!
i dont normally use the radio buttons provided at the bottom of the review page cos their options do not reflect my views all the time.
rest assured this is cool
the sort of thing i would be jealous of if i was in the club and you were playing it to be honest.
only thing i could fault is its a bit trancey/ravey for me but thats just taste like i said pro sound
Awesome!!
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08-08-2008 05:54 |
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BESHAI
Beshai
Registration Date: 17-05-2008
Posts: 100
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08-08-2008 17:29 |
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thechronic
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Deleted for copyright reasons: contains sample and lead melody of Lacuna Coil's track with the same name.
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