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Registration Date: 12-11-2003
Posts: 2
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Please check out my new track 'alakran' and post your comments here!!!
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13-02-2004 22:01 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
Posts: 4,197
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Well, all what can I say is...
Way to go! This maybe not the best tune I've ever heard (you know what I mean) but I just ROCK on its' inventivity! Reminding on me, hehehe... 
Nice techno influence on it, though begining to be boring after a while... Nice channel mixing, left-right ear... the part at 1:18 I like the most of the tune, along with that nice build up afterwhile... but the start of the break afterwhile is little.. hmm... weak..
You could have used stronger (darker) bass line there, along with the existing one...
Nice tune man, way to go! 
Love Thyself (unfinished).mp3
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16-02-2004 22:26 |
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Registration Date: 08-01-2004
Posts: 58
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The snare in the first part is a bit too standard, beat needs a real boost, spice up your hihat (not only that bell-type sound) and snare.
The techno-synth sequence (bassy part that starts at about 1:14) is a bit too much like an old-school techno synth, don't really think it fits...
Too little variation
Nice effort, keep on goin'!
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17-02-2004 01:07 |
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