RonaldoVetro 
Ronaldo Vetro
Registration Date: 27-07-2008
Posts: 16
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The build up is too calm, there's no tension building in it and the drop is a kind of non event with the bassline just rudely jumping in.. Try and establish an atmosphere and gradually build it it so the drop is powerful The samples in the intro could be cleaned up a tad.. I can hear the white noise and grain from the original recording, cutting in and out, these could probably be taken out with EQ-ing it.. whack a hi pass on it and it should be fine. The drum breaks need to change up a bit and the EQ-ing sorted out. Lo-cut all the drum parts to about 50 -60hZ to stop them interfering in the sub section.. boost the high end on hats to make them sparkly and boost the highs a little on any cymbal breaks to make them sheen. Snare needs to punch through and the bass drum is mixed painfully loud to a point where it doesn't gel with the break. Make sure the samples you use are of the highest quality aswell.. Mix down and compress the whole break and layer some hi-freq breaks like sparkly hats and rides. It's very, very dancey as in it sounds like fast trance. Try and filter the pads so they dont have so much low end, its all a bit muddy down in the mid and mid low ranges. It reminded me a bit of Blames tunes, have that really dancy huge pad sounds which I like a lot, this tune could, with an amount of work be pretty cool sounding!
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