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Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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Please check out my new track 'The Betrayer' and post your comments here!

damn computers, i hate em!

i've had to go back to FL5 as my pc is having a fit when i try produce on FL7.
expect more in the near future.
lots of new peeps on the site of late.
i hope to get round to checking all your material.

I made this little number over the last 3 days.
a style i'm liking atm. dancefloor tek.
kinda ruff vibe with a progressive feel.

any thoughts would be welcomed.

Peace, Seven Gun

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23-07-2008 18:17
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez 7G Big Grin

yeah r u normally jump up yeah? love the synth in the intro, almost reminds me of virus stuff at one point Big Grin

haha love the drop man beats rollin smoothly, wish i could get such results after only 3 days work - more like 3 months for me! Tongue

wicked little edits with that mad bass synth, definately a nice variety of synths in this one overall!

so i guess in terms of suggestions - another layer on the beat possibly? may jus be a preference thing, also some more fx in those areas where u take the beat out, more atmo

lovin this tune mate! respect Bigup

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23-07-2008 19:47 Homepage of Ketz
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Yeah man, great to see you back with nice new tuneage. It's been too long!

This is wicked mate. It sounds instantly good. It's actually very different from what I expected. A lot more techy and vibey. Tonnes of variations and atmosphere too, little edits and changes ups... old Seven ain't no one trick pony eh. Big Grin

The mix is loud, as per from you. As a personal preference I would always take it down a notch because it can sound too harsh otherwise, imo, but I know that's your style, so ignore that advice. Levels seem very good too me. Although I would perhaps turn up the breaks a little cos they're not quite punching through enough I reckon. Pretty much every sound is nicely EQed and very crisp tho.

One thing I think this is lacking is more sub. It's slightly light on heaviness, if ya know what I mean. Also, I think it could do with some more reverb because, overall, it's a tad dry.

Melodies are very nice throughout. This would work well on a dancefloor.

I'm scratching my head trying to think of some more suggestions but I can't come up with any. This is a proper tasty tune by any standards. One of your best no question.

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23-07-2008 19:49 Homepage of Tomos
Timmi Timmi is a male
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likin this tune, especially wen the drums totally change around 2:30, nice touch.

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23-07-2008 23:55 Homepage of Timmi
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Nice groovy DnB track!

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24-07-2008 00:48 Homepage of bobis
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Been working all day, just about to go to bed after some serious Wow bizniz (for the horde!!), and thought I'd check this tune out after seeing it when on the site at work earlier..

Oh man, its sick, real sick mate Devil

Loving the tone of the beats and the structure of the bass, this, for me, without doubt goes up there along with The Funktopus as some of your best work on this site.. Big Grin

Much respeckt


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24-07-2008 02:19
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Wow, aggressive! I'm loving the punch on the drums, crisp mixdown. Liking the bass aswell, really moody, also punches out and hits you in the face. The layer of atmosphere is great aswell adds that little summat to the experience.. Really finding it difficult to fault so i'm just gonna listen and enjoy it Big Grin

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25-07-2008 06:51 Homepage of c_ctrl
Sozai Sozai is a male
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Hey, well what can i say? there is not really much input i can think of cos everything is pretty much spot on!

All the synth sounds are are sick, and the beats cut through the mix nicely and the track just keeps on rollin on nicely. I've gotta say i am pretty envious if this is what you come up with in 3 days so nice one mate!!!!!

Love this tune!
25-07-2008 11:51
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rrrrrollin
no time 2 reveiw but had 2 jus say

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26-07-2008 16:36
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EZ man

Cool cool tune man

Where is that higher pitched vocal snippet from?? swear i've heard it somewhere before n cant for life of me think where - Is it from a zelda game or summat?????

Production wise, Beats are solid, like the way you're changin it every 8 bars or so

Bass is good, nice to hear the wobble being used a bit more creatively. Can't hear the sub in there much though, i reckon you could do something interesting with a call n answer kind of bassline between the wobble and a more pronounced sub???

Very clean crisp mix as usual

Big tune

enjoyed

BH



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26-07-2008 17:56 Homepage of Binary Havoc
RonaldoVetro RonaldoVetro is a male
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I liked this track.
the quality of sound is good,nice drums.
yeah i think is a good work.
Cheers mate.

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27-07-2008 06:44
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Nice track, especially the sound that starts around 2.11 sec works really well, but personnaly I would like that sound to pop out a bit more, just because it´s catching my interest Smile
Your track could do with less repetition of the voice samples and the sirene because they are quite exceptional to hear and when I hear them multiple times in a non-changed version then it doesn't really stand out and/or add something anymore.
And there's a sound, don't know how to call it but it's streaming through the whole track and sort of sounds like electro/tetris stuff, that one might do better with more variation during the times when its low in toneheight. (Sorry for the clumsy description ghe).
And what's been said before, sometimes the track misses some warmth, maybe it's reverb, or maybe you could work with more soft melodylines which float over the whole.
Next to those points I think it's a nice track, it just needs some more detailed things.
Overall EQ is ok I think, but can't give you any advise on that one because my speakers here aren't that good. At least I didn't hear weird volume differences oslt Smile

Cheers Smile !

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27-07-2008 12:47 Homepage of fade doni
BESHAI BESHAI is a male
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love ur drum sound big sound bro. really feeling the intro. loving the pads. i liked the drop but want to hear more bass. diggin' the tune though good production.

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28-07-2008 03:04 Homepage of BESHAI
Gregg Gregg is a male
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Can’t really add much, it’s quality work as always. I’m amazed by the loud, clear sound that you broadcast, big up!

Things that I really liked here where the evol laughter and the siren. Those samples really add an unique touch, sounds great ( I don’t think you overused them).

Keep it up!
28-07-2008 11:20 Homepage of Gregg
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wow man. the quality and clarity that you achieve is amazing. this is a great tune too, the drums are nice, all sounds are perfect almost. although i do agree the sub is a bit weak, maybe just my speakers though. it does border on being too repetitive though. production wise though, excellent...peace
09-08-2008 17:24
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I really like this tune, so i will be shortSmile
The beats and the bass are sounds cool. Maybe the drums could have more power.
There are some sick synths, i like them.
The only thing what i dont like is that siren sample.
Nice work Bigup
09-08-2008 17:41 Homepage of Krisch
Nick ZZ Nick ZZ is a male
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Not a bad into, drumz are alright.
The bass/synth is nice
Liike the second bass/synth
Dig the drum edits
Overall the tune is good. The structure is not bad, the breakdown is in the right spot, but the tune needs a bit more sounds for variation. Z

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09-08-2008 20:37 Homepage of Nick ZZ
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