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ez dnbbe crew! got a new track ere im workin on, back to the jump up. I've been workin on this 1 for a while, at first the bassline wasnt catchy enough an now it sounds a bit unoriginal so I've come to a dead end on this 1, so I'm gonna let it rest for a while, see what people think and in the mean time im workin on another track with a deeper/liquid style. big up!
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I feel like I'm in the same boat man. I like the tune I'm working on but its not going anywhere.
I'm defintitly feeling it.
I like the breaks at the end. They keep the groove interesting. Everthing sounds good except I'd say the bass needs more kick to it. Some parts it sounds great, some are definitely lacking in presence.
I like that drum kit. Very clean and it really punches through everything.
That break at 2:55 gets me every time. good stuff
In general, I like it. Some nice funky liquid vibes there. The bass sounds like dubstep at times, which is no bad thing.
Towards the end tho, I felt my interest waning and the tune kinda dies away. It's lacking a dominant melody. There's a good mix of bass sounds but nothing to tie them all together. I'd think about adding some melodic pads in the background.
Beats are ok but a bit uninspiring. The pattern is too basic, imo, it needs to be more funky and rolly. Also, the snare is too long. It should be more snappy, imo.
The tune has deffo got potential tho.
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sneaky tunes here mate, but i agree with leonces, the bass needs a bit more too it in the mis range but the riff is awsome, sick tuneage, definatly a nice sound with much potential
the beats r crystal clear, love the balance between the kick and snare but it needs more between , maybe a amen or jus a few more hats about the place.
imo the beats between section could be a bit more crazy but over all im liking, love ur sound mate, spot on, keet it rollin!
Heya, am liking this track. It definately has potential it be a killer!
The beat is solid and keeps driving the track, thou a little stiff. Just a small changes in the break now and then could really bring the track alive and keep the listener interested.
The bass line is sick, and all it needs is beefing up to make it fuller. Just layer up a few more sub basses and it'll be sick!
cheers guys, ive been workin more on this 1. ive been fillin out the drums and the bassline is soundin very different. thanks for the help, ill be postin another version up soon, and ill hav my new mix posted up soon. saaaaaaaafe.
timmi
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Atmos T - You See Me EP Out now 4 free download
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i actually like the intro beat, drop is cool but it lacks sumthin, the bass is cool but it doesn't get u goin if u know what i mean
so really more elemnts across the board to make it a bit more interesting, more fx and maybe pads etc in the background to help with transitions between sections
Definitely got potential. It has a great string sample/synth accent in it which could be expanded upon if you were short of an idea where to take it. Maybe introduce that as a main theme throughout and vary the bassline to that? .. just an idea. Anyways I like the direction it's gone in so far.
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Very nice tune you got here mate. Don't know what it is you're saying about the bassline, it sounds pretty original to me. Very good production, feels like you're rolling along with the listener instead of copy-pasting stuff again monotonously.
The structure is also very well built as far as we can listen, this being a preview and all. Only problem is the drop could be a bit shorter, it seems like it's on and on for a little too long. Good thing the tune's good or else it would get pretty annoying. Nice background sounds and very good drum programming. Definitely like to hear this at a party.
Very nice mate, really enjoyed it overall.
