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intricate
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Registration Date: 02-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Purple Screen' and post your comments here!
Easy cheerful shit )))
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19-07-2008 18:04 |
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Tomos 
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Hmm, I'm usually into mellow, liquid vibes but I'm just not feeling this tune I'm afraid. The sound quality is ok (too much stereo panning tho and too much panning to the left with some of the synths), but the tune itself didn't inspire me. The melodies aren't strong enough and the beats are pretty flat (too many shuffle sounds and the pattern is too standard).
Sorry man, you know I'm a big fan or your other stuff. 
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21-07-2008 19:41 |
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Producer DJ Obbsessed
Registration Date: 27-03-2008
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have to say im not feelin this one either, compared to ur other stuff mate this one is a bit week, the beats r thin and the melodys a bit week.
ur other tunes r absolutly stompin but i cant get into this, im realy confused :-S i dont mean to be mean but stick to the hard stuff mate cause ur unreal at it
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21-07-2008 23:21 |
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RonaldoVetro
Ronaldo Vetro
Registration Date: 27-07-2008
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Very nice! The lead line is sweet as hell, reminds me of old Prodigy, so definitely good lol. The drums are nicely worked, maybe layer a few more one shots over the break cos at the moment it sounds too blatently like an amen and that really bugs me.. maybe its what you were going for, either way it's up to you! The Sub was heavy, very heavy but it could do with a few more change ups, simply because it seemed like one note the whole way through and in a club thats gonna tire people out very quickly. The drop drops nicely, and rolls along in a very satisfying way. One other thing that I might be tempted to do would be turn the hi hats down over the intro, i know the whole dj friendly thing but a tune is a tune and they take away from the atmospheric intro and cover it in hats. On the whole its a good sounding piece of work
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04-08-2008 21:09 |
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fade doni
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Registration Date: 22-07-2008
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thrumpet is boring in the beginning and becomes higher at a weird moment. And as has been said, try to pan this in the middle and the sub that seems to follow the thrumpet, maybe you could let that melodyline differ a bit. So that every instrument doesn't follow the same path but complete each other.
There is a nice percussion thing in the background in the beginning of the track till halfway, maybe you could bring that onto the foreground and let it take over the role of the hihats once in a while?
high piano tones around 1.48 are nice, you could let them come back more around that part.
sometimes the track feels a little cheesy, but the drop around 2.50 is nice, but then as it continues it's a bit boring. I don't exactly know what it misses, but I think it's lack of details in patterns.
For me the track starts to flow well after the 2.50 or 3 min, I think because the piano tune comes back, again becomes better at 4 min.
Overall it's a nice idea, but a bit more variation could do no harm 
cheers and bring some more cheerful shit!!!
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04-08-2008 23:51 |
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