 [dj] Leonces - Outbreak |
[dj] Leonces ![[dj] Leonces is a male](images/male.gif "[dj] Leonces is a male")
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Registration Date: 13-04-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Outbreak' and post your comments here!
So this one contains some movie samples from a few Zombie movies. That's all been left out, and the songs been shortened by 1:30 because frankly, without the samples, it just drags on with all these choppy transitions. If you want the full effect, go to my myspace page <www.myspace.com/djleoncesdnb>
In fact, go and listen to that version and review it, I haven't bothered to smooth everything out after deleting all that stuff. I haven't been uploading any of my recent tracks because as they're all part of a concept album based on zombies, they contain copyrighted material. I usually don't bother uploading these tracks because they're really based around these samples -- They tell a part of the story, so without them you really won't understand where I'm coming from.
Anyway check it out, let me know what you think. This one's finished and I've started on the next, I might upload a preview of that one tomorrow.
As always, I appreciate any insight you have to offer.
-leo
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19-07-2008 06:54 |
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junglist06
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Registration Date: 12-09-2006
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the intros kinda borin tbh, your kick needs a bit of power to it, it sounds flat to me and your snare sounds muffled and a bit weak. the tune doesnt flow into the breaak it just stops.
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aka D-Man.....salute the junglist general
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20-07-2008 23:59 |
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this to high pitched if u understand where im comin threw the squeel is horrible and so is the high bass and tbh the melodies a bit basic maybe u did better in the other track. i do like the flangery pan u got goin on the sudden stop is not a nice thing to hear. i think pads could easily bring this track back to life and tone the squeel down to a lower octave maybe put sum glitch on it to make it more interesting ? the drums are repetitive and lack the effort i think a few more patterns slipped in there would be nice and perhaps a section designated to a more powerfull and complex bassline. -- candida
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who ever said you shouldnt play with fire obviously cant spin
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25-07-2008 21:35 |
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MR. VICIOUS
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Registration Date: 23-07-2008
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yo, "this is better than i can do but im writing a revi'ew because i want producer rites. I will start with the main melody perhaps it could evolve or have filters laid over it more effected to make it more interesting. the percussion is gd keeps the whole track moving and this track would definetly be a flop without it (no insult intended). the drums are pretty basic however if minimal is what u were looking for (and i dont know what ur aims where) than there good however if tech is what u were looking for then they need alot of improvement. perhaps implementation of a ghost snare could beef the drums out a little bit not so much but just fill in or effect it to fill in the gaps reverb or delay ? another thing that needs improving (and this is where i fall short mainly) is that it needs more movement and change to keep people interested by the time i have written this report im already fealing very bored of that melody. Beefier bassline powerfull reece would be nice. points i do like are the vocals the snare roll and the rises. however they could have been used more effectivly. in no way am i saying im a great producer and please do not be offended by what i have written here and dont hold grudges you have got potential perhaps u dont take enough time listening to ur tunes and thinking ... how can i make this better thanx for giving me the track to report on thanx"(candida)
MR. VICIOUS
Keep rocking hard
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