drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » scoopdna - Move scoopdna - Move Author Post scoopdna Cool Tourist Registration Date: 07-07-2008 Posts: 43 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Move' and post your comments here! This tune is called move it originaly has vocals but i have taken them out to obide by any copyright infringement the vocal version can be listend to at www.myspace.com/mcscoop i used cubase sx3 to make this tune and vst instruments tell me what you think i can do to make it better or worse lol thank leave any comments scoop __ Promos Out Now www.nuurbanmusic.co.uk 16-07-2008 21:40 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  ez Scoop! finally managed to get ur tune up on here I see lol im not gna give it the ol technical mumbo jumbo on this one as i already listened on ur myspace but yeah man, glad ur finally on here, make sure those tunes keep comin!! love this tune, sounds even better with the vocal, this is just a little teaser i guess. wicke vibe, would get me straight to the dancefloor! lookin forward to more! ez __ 16-07-2008 21:56 scoopdna Cool Tourist Registration Date: 07-07-2008 Posts: 43 Helpfulness rating:  yeah i have due to a good bloke who goes by the name of um um oh yeah you ketz thanks m8 really appreciated had major troubles doing it thanks m8 __ Promos Out Now www.nuurbanmusic.co.uk 17-07-2008 00:43 technetiumzk Super-Duper Rad Funky Registration Date: 21-04-2008 Posts: 57 Helpfulness rating:  hey m8 thanks for the review on my track! nows my turn eh? lol k so In the intro/beginning, one of the hats is a bit offbeat. it still is throughout the whole song, but is really unnoticable except for in the intro. im TOTALLY diggin the main melody on that short synth, really gives a bundle of flavor and warmth to the mix, and flute and strings fill it up man. great work in that aspect! the reece is good, but needs more low end. kick needs to be more full and bassy, and the snare need a few more layers and some beefing up. [/opinion] other than that, great job man! lookin forward to more tunes, and ill keep my eyes peeled for the final mix of this track! im gunna request you on myspace, good job again. ZK (nosebleed) __ LOL im 14, deal with it. 17-07-2008 10:01 coddy Producer Registration Date: 25-10-2007 Posts: 57 Helpfulness rating:  Hey Bruv Cheers for the review, since posting that track i have layered the kiks snrs and added a new break to fill the whole lot out it sounds real fat now...... As far as making your tune better or worse.. i reckon when making tunes with only vsts it is real hard to not sound totally synthetic. What i reckon you do is replace some of the synths with real samples, find some crazy samples from anywhere that sound similar to the vst you want to replace, then put them into a sampler and make the midi sequence the same as the vst pattern you are replacing. Play the vst and the sampler over the top of one another (you will find that the pitch is different for the sample u just added) transpose the samplers midi pattern up or down till it is in key with the vst, then turn the vol right down on your vst track, get your new sample sounding tight with the tune till your happy with it now slowly turn the vol on your vst back up a little at a time till you get the two sounds blending nicely(filters can help here). That should give your tune a realer feel. Same sort of thing with the drums. There is nothing i cant stand more than a dnb tune with no breaks in it get a couple of breaks and high pass them at around 150-250hz then sequence the breaks using the splice tool and copy and paste till you get a pattern you like. this should add the nice splashy sound that is common in tunes of this style. Check this tutorial for a more detailed description of the breaks. http://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=chase+and+status+tutorial&searc h_type=&aq=0&oq=chase+and+status+tut hope this helps 17-07-2008 13:26 scoopdna Cool Tourist Registration Date: 07-07-2008 Posts: 43 Helpfulness rating:  hello m8 thanks for comment two things i did know the kick has no bottom end its been driveing me up the wall i think i may change that completely and in regards to the hat i have an off beat hat which may have to much hi eq and it does sound off ill take that out i think because its makeing the tune sound a bit off key the vocal version is better check it out www.myspace.com/mcscoop thanks for your thoughts __ Promos Out Now www.nuurbanmusic.co.uk 17-07-2008 14:24 CheesyPOOF5 Steppa Registration Date: 16-12-2007 Posts: 84 This is great! I forgot I was even listening to a song on dnb.be! 18-07-2008 07:43 stickbubbly mad man Registration Date: 16-09-2004 Posts: 377 Helpfulness rating:  sounds good off the start. drums are nice and fat. good atmo's. really love the intro. think you could boost the sub in this one. gimmey mid range is dirty. i find some of the synth/reece lines after the drop are a bit cheesy. but thats just my personal taste. nice work bruv. cheers! 18-07-2008 20:42 GeeZZ Cool Producer Registration Date: 31-03-2007 Posts: 163 Helpfulness rating:  i think there sumfin up with the hats at the beging maybey a little off mix is good nothing seems outa place i like the gateing on the pad works really well but hten that brass synth that cums in to me sounds really naff a bit eightys espeicially with that piccolo/flute synth, the flutey synth sounds fine on its own tho i like the build as well by the way maybey the hi end bass cud be a little louder 19-07-2008 00:38 scoopdna Cool Tourist Registration Date: 07-07-2008 Posts: 43 Helpfulness rating:  hello evry one the hats at begining have got to go seriously i know exaclly what everyone means they sound out but there not im not going to make a tune with hats that are out only if i was drunk he he he he so there getting abolished in regards to the cheesy riff and bass bass could defo do with puimping up the bass but the kick has alot of high end i think its just a bad sample its been pissing me off so when i next go on cubase im takeing it out completely and working a new kick now the cheesy riff i like to sometimes do something you wouldnt exspect in the tune so i thought i liked the sound andwould do a happy little riff lol but this has got to go to studio for a proper mix down and add ons thats why its only a clip a work in progress thanks for all your comments i take evrey thing in to consideration that poeple say and listen to your opinions the other thing i have just had a meeting to day at nuurban and we have a record deal with them for the serious tunes go to www.myspace.com/mcscoop there i do collabs with rico who is the mutts check him at www.myspace.com/ricodna ill keep you in fromed first promos for new dangerous new age recordings tune out in round abouts 4 week and release in 6 but i will post you the details thanks for reading boooh __ Promos Out Now www.nuurbanmusic.co.uk 19-07-2008 01:56 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » scoopdna - Move