 stiffer - Eye Of The Storm |
stiffer
Producer
Registration Date: 06-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Eye Of The Storm' and post your comments here!
kinda melodic and chilled but with an undertone of darkness.
made entirely with cubase sx and soundforge
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14-07-2008 15:04 |
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stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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nice start.
cool drop. sub is really sweet.
really nice use of pads and bells.
still seems a bit empty to me though at parts. i think it could use some slight build ups in the background and some vocals are always good in chilled out tunes like these.
nice work. cheers!
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15-07-2008 20:15 |
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Botz
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Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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nice the melody,maybe make the volume of the bass higher,that is very good made.Also the rease a little bit more distorted.Very good variation e construction.
It's a trip!!!good work!
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15-07-2008 22:53 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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The melodies are excellent mate, absolutely love them. I'm on my sixth listen and I'm still really enjoying it. 
However, what is really letting this down is the fact that the mix is so quiet and thin sounding. You must be doing something wrong because I can't remember hearing a track this quiet. Even when I turn up my volume on my computer, it still sounds weak. Shame cos this is a stunning track. Melody wise, it's one of the best I've heard for quite a while.
The beats definitely need filling out. I love the ride you use, very Ed Rush sounding. But the kick and snare sound really flat. Also, you need some ghosts in a track like this. I can hear a decent amount of sub, which is good.
Too bad you use Cubase because I'd be very happy to remix this and get it sounding a lot bigger. Damn!
Bad sound quality but nevertheless an excellent tune.
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24-07-2008 20:22 |
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c_ctrl
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Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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First thing that hit me was the drums, they need some more shuffle, some ghosts and mixed with more punch. This needs a roller! The sub works really well with the reese, but the reese needs something doin to it, i cant decide if it's dirtying up or smoothing down.. 
with the piano lead line there's some dissonance on some of the hits.. is it a delay interfering with the next key strike? maybe that needs cleaning up cos it sounds a little sloppy. The atmosphere is amazing and the musical elements are all sound. I'd really like to hear this mixed down properly, so much potential! nice one mate
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25-07-2008 07:05 |
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