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philbee philbee is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Resentment(wip)' and post your comments here!

easy,tune im workin on
deep/techy vibe
feedback recieved gratefully and gracefully
big love to all the dotbe family

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13-07-2008 22:44 Homepage of philbee
rez rez is a male
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not bad, the intro is well done, but when the drums kick in, track stays the same for like 2 minutes, which is a bit too long for me. also, the sub at the end needs more power, i think. the fx effects are nice.

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13-07-2008 23:00
Timmi Timmi is a male
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tuuunage. nuff sed!

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13-07-2008 23:29 Homepage of Timmi
marukomu marukomu is a male
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Ez mate.

Nice sinister intro and I love the atmosphere and that echoing, synthy sound in the background. Like the eerie fx and bits and bobs going on in the build up. Nice, clean punchy beats when they come in and I'm into that little drumroll before the beat starts. Personally I'd make the bassline a little bit louder and bring it in a bit earlier as it does seem to stay the same for a while but it's a really minor quibble. The production and sound/mix is really clean. The tune is sounding moody and nice overall and I look forward to hearing the final version. Wink

Thoughts appreciated for my latest called "Module" on here.

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14-07-2008 10:24 Homepage of marukomu
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez mr philbee Big Grin

yeah likin the intro, very moody, lots of crazy sounds goin on man, wicked atmosphere building! Bigup

beats nice n crisp / punchy as per all the other tunes i've heard of urs, nice shuffles too, all flows well as one solid beat

haha that sub is nice mate, when it drops got a proper creepy roller kinda vibe - i like a lot! that twisted synth that comes in every 2 bars is wicked too!

so far so good mate! in terms of suggestions yeah a bit more variation (couple subtle switch ups on the beat would go well, nothing too dramatic for this kinda tune) and possibly one more synthafter the drop to cover the mid frequencies to give it a proper hook

really likin the direction that this is goin it! Big Grin

so yeah must be hard keepin time for makin tunes with a wife n kids eh, got me gal askin to get married dunno when i'll ever find time for tunes once that happens! lol i struggle enough for time as it is!

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15-07-2008 20:00 Homepage of Ketz
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very good the quantity of different sounds,at top the bass.maybe make harder the snare.I think is missing a real rithm/melody.add another distorted rease.

15-07-2008 22:59
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i shud start by saying i am a fan o dark stuff but i like it sum where between dark n jump up on the spectrum

as an intro it wud work great as theres an blatent lack of a drop

sounds great on the headphones
luv the percusion at the beging bass real dark

overall top notch quality well mixed ect
19-07-2008 05:13
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nice dark ambience.

loveley kick but the snare needs another layer imo. something more metallic.

organize a few more samples and layer them in.
the track would benefit.

nice n deep but a little too simple.

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23-07-2008 17:59
inheavenswake inheavenswake is a male
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drums maybe a bit more complex i like complex drum and a song with kik snare kik kik sanre over n over again is boring i like it mad n hectic maybe not ur style but theres alot of things u can do to beef them up. i like the bass however it would be nice if there was a break maybe keep the hi hats or change hats slightly and then drop in an all powerfull reece in the same style as that sub bass its got a very tribal fealing too it like maybe a bad mescal trip in a dnb rave lol its got potential but its got a long way to go -- candida

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25-07-2008 21:39 Homepage of inheavenswake
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