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technetiumzk
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Registration Date: 21-04-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Bad Dream Demo' and post your comments here!
All of the bass is made in 3xosc. Im working on automated highpass filter lfo's and stuff, its awesome. imo the bass is my best non-sample bass yet!
idk about the intro, probably going to change it.
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im 14, deal with it.
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10-07-2008 03:54 |
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Krisch
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I dont like the intro. Would be better if you change it. The bassline is quite cool but its force back the beats to the background. The drum programming is also good. I like the little variations. The track sounds too flat for me. Maybe because just the lack of a proper mastering. But its just a preview isnt it
If you turn up the beats its will be a fine track. Good work.
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10-07-2008 12:39 |
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Tomos
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Great stuff, lots of potential in this short preview. What VST did you use with the 3xosc? Sounds great. Love the modulaton and twistyness you get in the bass.
Beats are solid. Nice groove to them. I reckon you should boost them a bit. Are you using compression on them? They seem to change volume at certain stages. One minute they sound full and fat, the next minute they've gone quieter. It makes me think you're using too much compression. This is most noticeable at the drop at 0.51. The beats really dip in volume and lose their punch.
Still a good preview tho. Very much enjoyed it. Keep up the good work big man.
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10-07-2008 22:59 |
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junglist06
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I really like this lil preview, much better than the last tune you uploaded. bass is wicked, really got my head nodding. have to agree with tomos n krisch about the beat. keep at it though, this will be a wicked tune!
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11-07-2008 13:51 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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nice intro, lush vocal, intro is a little short to be honest, drop comes too suddenly,
bass is nice and deep but a little over-powering in the mix, drums seem to fade in the backgorund a little, good variations on the drums tho, maybe a high-passed break layered on em or some high percussion (hats, tambs, shakes) would brighten em up a bit cuz they sound a little dull.
track has got some potential and the intro is real sweet.
man, when i was 14 my tunes sounded nowhere near this standard, they were just noise and presets programmed in random order to form big piles of mess...keep at it....
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12-07-2008 12:24 |
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Lepharia
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Great structure and suspense. Bass in the beginning a bit too thin, becomes fatter later. Melodies sound ace. Might overdo the mix, some parts too dominant. very tight rhythm. best song on the list.
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16-07-2008 07:19 |
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scoopdna
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Registration Date: 07-07-2008
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big up man like this track sounds good no faults well done
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17-07-2008 03:51 |
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