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tryptech 
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Please check out my new track '3x100 (300)' and post your comments here!
Synths are elecribe, zeta, 3Xosc
Beats are sampled
Voice Psitech samplepack
Enjoi
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09-07-2008 00:44 |
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Gregg
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Cool intro. I like the sounds you use, they fit pretty well together.
Beats need work though. They need to punch more and be (at least in parts) fuller. Make your kick and snare sound harder, add some cymbals…
The bassline is cool, but the part where it goes alone with the beats shows that it is not heavy enough. Make the sound a bit fuller.
The speech sample is not bad either but you should place it better through your tune. Place it after a build up, at a break or whatever. And watch out you’re not overusing it.
Another thing about the speech sample… eq it a bit. There is some backround noise that you should reduce and make it fit better into your mix.
Overall I like it and I think with beefing up some of the elements you could achieve a nice peace of music.
Keep working on this one.
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09-07-2008 18:27 |
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tryptech
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Joo thnx
i agree with teh voice samples & beatz man
it kind of minimal
thnx for listening
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09-07-2008 19:02 |
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junglist06
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cool intro, i like your vocal sample, i would say cut one of the three times it is used in your intro out, maybe cut out the first one out of the intro, so it starts from whats currently the second time you have used the vocal, hope that makes sense to you, or may cut out the the second time you have used the vocal. the beat needs a bit more beef to it, the snares could do with some more high end to them. At 1.16 the bass sounds a bit out of time to the tune to me at one point. At 1.37 it doesnt really flow into the vocal break, and it is 14 seconds untill the break and bass is brought back which is too long imo. A bit of work and you could have a cool tune finished.
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09-07-2008 22:37 |
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tryptech
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Joo thnx man
the same for your track man
really good oldskool vibe
greetz
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09-07-2008 23:17 |
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Sephiroth
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lol ive got that voice sample-pack i think (the sci-fi one), sweet pack.
intro pads are nice, sample is used a too much, use it before a drop or on a breakdown, really noisy too, some restoration tools would clean that up (waves xclick, xhum, xnoise in particular are amazing for that).
kick and snare could do with being a little louder, need more punch to em, more percussion, ghosts and breaks would beef out the drums a lot too.
the synth work is pretty nice, more automation would give it a little movement tho, sub pretty warm (maybe a slight touch of distortion on it would bring it out a bit more).
not bad overall, needs filling out tho, a bit bare at the mo.
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10-07-2008 14:11 |
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Tomos
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Totally agree with Septh (again. The guy is a reviewing machine 
) Those beats definitely need more punch. They are sounding a bit thin at the mo. In fact, the whole tune is a bit on the thin side. I still like the melodies tho, I think you're on the right track with them. I'm diggin the cosmic vibe too, gives it mystery and errie-ness. Beef up those beats and you could be on to a winner mate. Good stuff so far.
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10-07-2008 21:51 |
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tryptech
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thx people for reviewing
its indeed thin, it was more of a bad choice i made i think, i loved the bass too much & added too little effects & sounds
cheerz
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ANALOGUE (Tryptech)
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10-07-2008 23:21 |
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