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InsidiousX InsidiousX is a male
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Please check out my new track 'The Ghost Train' and post your comments here!

Just poppin this track on ere to get some feedback on how i can improve it

Still looking for a vocal sample to fill the gap on the intro and maybe rename the track based on the sample.

Anyways, tips, suggestions, comments and any feedback in general would be much apreciated on this

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09-07-2008 00:39 Homepage of InsidiousX
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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like the intro, off to a great start, snare sounds a little muddy, needs more brightness to it.
drop is quite nice, shakers are too loud tho, pattern is a little repititve aswell on the shaker loop, try varying the volume, automating the pan and the cut-off/ resonance to make em sound more realistic, like a human was playing em.
bass is really quiet and the sub defo needs boositng.
ok overall, needs work on the levels i think and some elements of the drums need tweaking (shakers and snare in particular.)

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10-07-2008 14:07 Homepage of Sephiroth
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Not my kinda vibe, but at least this one is sounding much better EQ wise. Still needs tweaking tho - like Septh said, it needs more brightness. Sounds kinda muddy. Also, those shakers are slightly too loud.

Melodies are ok. They fit the vibe you're going after. Not my bag, like I alread ysaid, but others will dig this I'm sure. I'd lose that opening rave-synth tho. It sounds weird to me because it starts out like a house tune.

Overall, not bad, certainly an improvement, so big ups for that.

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10-07-2008 21:34 Homepage of Tomos
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big up the essex kru! Big Grin

haha like the idea with this one man! like the beat man, needs to be brought out a bit more, like the others said, its a bit muddy, needs to be more crisp, snare needs more of a high end

likin the bass, sits well in terms of rhythm Big Grin

really man for me the main thing is to get that beat sorted, programming is cool, just needs some eq work, i guess u could experiment with another snare if that doesnt work

u got some cool fx goin on in the background

good work overall - get it finished!

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11-07-2008 23:10 Homepage of Ketz
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