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Vectrex Vectrex is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Damage' and post your comments here!

Track we've been working for a few days. Drums done in FL and rewired to ableton to add the synths and mix the song down.
sorry we didn't review the last few weeks, problems with the internet connection.

hope to get some reviews

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08-07-2008 20:39 Homepage of Vectrex
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez boss - so ur a group? 2 peeps? soz haven't checked ur profile yet Big Grin

yeah to the tune - firstly wanna say like that synth bass - nice movement Bigup cool melody too

overall u got a good idea goin on with this one. a few suggestions - beat needs more layers, sounds good but really needs more body and rolliness to it, more hh / shakers maybe?

on the drop the sub is too subtle for me, needs more presence, really get that low end in there to complement that wicked bass synth - get it more grimey!

im sure u'll sort out structure etc more, add more fx in the background etc keep it interestin

oh and maybe one more synth to really get that bass in ur face!

lookin forward to the finished tune! Big Grin

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08-07-2008 20:57 Homepage of Ketz
[dj] Leonces [dj] Leonces is a male
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The beat in the first minute throws me off a little -- As in the volume difference between beat 2 snare (low) and beat 4 (high) is too drastic. I see what you're trying to do but I think it could be a little more subtle. Rest of the rhythm section is good, but could use some hats or shakers or some sort of percussion thing up top thinning out the gaps.

The bass is rollin! It could use a little more omph though. At first I was thinking more low end. Def. agree with Ketz on that one though. Add in a sub bass on the drop. Add in some hats to keep it rollin along. Phat Bass with plenty of lows, Nice beat, needs some high end (hi hats or something) to fill out the frequency range.

I'm not too sure about the vocals around 0:30 -- overdone effects? I love the damage breaks though! Very pro sounding. So far so good.
09-07-2008 00:13
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Nice tune, me likes. It sounds like a mixture of rock music and Noisia to me. (That's no criticism, that's a combination made in heaven for me Big Grin ).

Yeah, the intro isn't too bad. Doesn't really build up the vibe enough tho. Needs more tention before that bassline drops. Cool melody tho. Very rock-y.

The bassline is huge mate. Love it. It's well EQed too. If I was gonna be hyper-critical tho, I'd say it needs more bite, more edgyness.

Beats are solid. They seem a tad empty to me tho. They need filling out a bit. How about adding some rides and layering them up.

Overall, a very nice tune indeed.

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10-07-2008 21:24 Homepage of Tomos
Timmi Timmi is a male
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nice tune, would get people movin on the dancefloor 4 sure, interested 2 see what the whole track sounds like. i reckon a section with that main bass melody an octave below would sound good, an would give it a bit more variation. nice work. safe.

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13-07-2008 23:38 Homepage of Timmi
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Cool intro, wicked bass, nice drum loopz, just wish it would build up a bit and come back in hard where it currently ends!
NICE THOUGH!
14-07-2008 15:47
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