Yeah, pretty good. I think the synth melody is over played tho, it needs changing at some point cos it stays constant throughout the track (I realise that this is a preview tho
. Also, there's too much panning on the synth. There's some really high pitched melodies in there which are excellent. You should explore them and use them more. Beats are ok, pretty solid. But they sound over compressed to me. They've got that squashed sound, particularly on the kick and snare. My guess is that you're using compression on the master channel because you can hear the loud elements (the kick in particular) compressing badly. Good start but go easy on the old compression.
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ez mate, yeah wicked melodies on this one! vocal fits in there too, some nice array of synths used
ya like tomos said a b of variation on that synth lead would be a good idea, jus some change-ups here n there to keep it interesting and flowing better
beat is good, yeah lower the compression, bit overdone, apart from that good work so far!
the tune is a bit generic, but its well pulled off. i do not like the intro sound pad thing, a bit annoying imo, but the vocal it spot on, man! nice drop, but need a bigger hit, like a crash or somefin. i like the snare, but needs a bit of compression, also, needs more bass. overall, good tune, only has a few flaws. keep it up, has potential~!
. Also, there's too much panning on the synth. There's some really high pitched melodies in there which are excellent. You should explore them and use them more. Beats are ok, pretty solid. But they sound over compressed to me. They've got that squashed sound, particularly on the kick and snare. My guess is that you're using compression on the master channel because you can hear the loud elements (the kick in particular) compressing badly. Good start but go easy on the old compression. 
