Not really getting this one - am all in favour of swearing as an art form but here it just distracts from the music
Musically it is pretty basic. Bass is very monotonous and flappy and overpowers the beats, beats seem to be just one sample looped over and over with no variation
Just gets rather boring really. The drums don't punch through the bass, the bass needs some serious eq'ing.
The vocal get a bit tedious
Don't get me wrong, I'm a fan of this type of style, I used to be a big grindcore/punk/hardcore fan. This sounds like a lot stuff I used to see back in London. But this needs some serious work
The intro with all the swear words was pretty cool actually I liked it. But then I was expecting more to come. The bass sounds too simple as all guys above me said. The break is one of the most used samples on the world so it didnt really get me. Well this track is really just a drum and bass...nothing more in there, besides the F words everywhere. It reminds me of my beginings. It just takes some time to get everything into your hands. Good try.
vary basic intro - i know that loop man - shoulda layered more to make it ur own, could have some fx pads behind those vocals in the intro to keep it more interesting and less basic
my fav is "u f**** wa****" lol that one cracks me up!! lol almost like out of an old kungfu flick but not
yeah the bass melody is very basic, could really focus on more switch ups and the synth reesey thing is a bit too distorted messy and overpowering, needs to be reigned back a bit and controlled a bit more
overall need to work on the variations on the bass and drums, sort the bass sytnh out and u'll be headed in the right direction
ps overall vocals are okay, but get a bit much aftera ehil, maybe jus leve em in the intro?
"this is better than i can do but im writing a review because i want producer rites. I will start with the main melody perhaps it could evolve or have filters laid over it more effected to make it more interesting. the percussion is gd keeps the whole track moving and this track would definetly be a flop without it (no insult intended). the drums are pretty basic however if minimal is what u were looking for (and i dont know what ur aims where) than there good however if tech is what u were looking for then they need alot of improvement. perhaps implementation of a ghost snare could beef the drums out a little bit not so much but just fill in or effect it to fill in the gaps reverb or delay ? another thing that needs improving (and this is where i fall short mainly) is that it needs more movement and change to keep people interested by the time i have written this report im already fealing very bored of that melody. Beefier bassline powerfull reece would be nice. points i do like are the vocals the snare roll and the rises. however they could have been used more effectivly. in no way am i saying im a great producer and please do not be offended by what i have written here and dont hold grudges you have got potential perhaps u dont take enough time listening to ur tunes and thinking ... how can i make this better thanx for giving me the track to report on thanx"(CANDIDA)
