I think the drop at 0:36 comes in a bit abruptly. The breaks are rolling well except I think you need a more prominent kick and snare. Would have liked to hear more of the intro with a bit more suspense before the drop.
Very sick fills, 0:46, 0:56 is especially wicked.
I like the bass.
Actually not feeling the vocal too much but the low pitch drop is pretty cool. I think it gets a little repetitive. Probably more of a personal preference than anything.
I think the chord progression at 1:45 is a little too obvious. Maybe play with the chord voicing to add a bit more tension.
I like the shuffling filtered break at 2:25
Overall I think this is the best I've heard from you, you're moving up fast
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aight well as for the new vers. deff feeling 2:26 sick halftiming but you still need to get rid of that vocal, or maybe pitch it up and glitch/twist it a bit more it could prolly sound nasty, nice intro as well but the break does kinda come abruptly. would try and nitpick but I got to run
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Intro - love the dirty bass but the sfx are kind of annoying and I feel they could do with being cut out sooner.
Drums - Nice & sliced, just as i like it but imo could do with turning the hi pass down as it kind of grates on you ears.
bass- dirty but not quite loud enough and sometimes are kind of absorbed by the loud & slightly tinny drums.
overall - danceable & bassy in general, good d'n'b tune overall!
just checked ur tunage on the myspac - agree with all the comments before - i like the rythem of the drums but i dont like their sound - xyzan mentioned as well, they need more beef!
overall tho, this is a bo tune man, much better than the other one
keep it up
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aah so young skywalker has converted to the darkside then eh? welcome!!
nutcase, didn't think u had it in you! loads and loads of energy!!! wicked beat, wicked synths, nice sub, good for the club i like a lot!!
really surprised with this mate, complete u turn from ur noral style!
vocal is a personal preference thing, not my thing but i can see how it works - fits well still
synth from 2:10 onwards - u couldn't resist could ya! bit of the ol trancey influence comin in there man - don't think u need it really, it lightens up the mood too mcuh, keep it dark, keep it distorted, keep it - EVIL
ur going from strength to strength man, really good stuff here man, like the direction ur heading in!
ooooh....evil intro, like that, those bass sounds are filth. build up is pretty sweet, drop happens really suddenly tho, more build-up work too ease it in a bit more. drums seem a bit messy but suddenly became intense around the minute mark, nice!
the vocal is awful, sorry but it doesn;t fit at all, the ravey synth too jus seems out of place completely.
drums are very splashy but seem to lack power in the low end, snare is very high and the drums dont have enough power too em, really bright but not enough low-end imo.
nice track overall, vocal and synth need to go really i think but other than that its very dirty, nice drum variations and interesting arrangement.
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