this isn't too bad, nice idea and can see how this sounds a little like M and FB,
but theres a few things i dont like.
Some of the notes of the bassline make it very cheesy, im no musical expert but it all sounds too "chirpy" sound of the sound choices dont help this either.
The beat is alright, hits the spot, i personally would tighen up the snare, its a bit too long imo
and the whole thing is a little slow, i'd notch it up a few bpm.
Thanks, no that i listen to it, i realize i could have made it a whole lot better.
Good news though, i made this with another track thats VERY dark and its better. so im going to upload that one as well.
First off...turn the break up a bit and pump the kick snare. i like the lil synths which emerge from the background from time to time. Some nice melodies u have here. Nice! Not that bad at all, but sometimes it sounds too kitshy for my taste. The sub is too loud in the higher notes i think, I would turn it down a bit, but thats just my ears. Nice track i like it. Good for this summer time!
not my style really tbh, not bad though, subs deffinately to loud, where your beat changes at 1.53 maybe you could use this straight from where it drops to help liven it up a little bit.
really cool intro like the way it all came in very matrix n futurebound. dig it sound could use some more layers and leads over the whole thing. and snare needs some work. but over all really feeling it.
more leads like the one that comes in after 2 mins or so
anyways, yeh the tune, hav to agree with the other comments, i really like ur ideas, theres lots of variation in ur tunes, the melodies are sweet - u just need to work on making everything bigger n beefier i rekon. tbh im really not feeling the lead bit at 1:53, too happy for my taste.
once u get tha sound creation sorted tho then ur production will b sweet as imo.
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yeah kinda like Matrix and Future bound, but a bit cheesier (i've done that loads man - its a fine line and indeed a hard balance to acheive in DnB) still nice melodies nevertheless
lacks a bit of energy for me, more of a listening tune rather than a dance one
doesn't seem to flow as well as ur last tune
snare needs a bit more high end from what i can hear on these headphones
like the intro, kinda old-school 80's pop feel to it, drums are pretty simple but nice and clear so it keeps the track rolling. that sound effect at 1:28, swear to god i was working on a sound nearly exactly the same bout an hour ago...wierd.
snare could maybe use another layer to make it
more snappy, gets a little lost when the synths start to build up.
some compression on the sub would even it out too, could be down to the piss-poor acoustics in my room but it sounds like it needs to evened out to make it more consistant.
not a bad tune overall tho, very cheesy and the track as a whole doesn't seem very fast and rolling imo but not bad.
