Please check out my new track 'Her Eyes' and post your comments here!
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This one is brand new ,just finished,kinda smoothe i guess,there is a small problem with compression but i will change that as soon,just strugglin to find free time to produce.All comments as always appreciated.
lovely melodies. ultra cool effects and synths, runs smoother than a new mercedes. i can see this one having a wide appeal.
right, the tune, the intro percussion sounds are a bit too high end for me, mind you i tend to be a bit too low end! maybe this is a problem from the mix being too loud tho.
2:59, the new synth that comes in, sounds a tiny bit out of place after the previous smooth synth. a little bit too gritty if u know wot i mean.
the guitars at 3:49, i like em a lot. would like to hear more of them if you could!
the bass, liking the melody but if you would automate them more i rekon that would be sweet.
yeh, the compression is a bit much, well it sounds like it is turned up to much on a maximiser imo, slightly redlining it too much.
anyways, this is a lovely tune, sort out the little probs and i would like to have this
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Wow, I love that intro section. I could easily imagine that coming from a pro producer. Excellent.
The first drop is sweet too. I kinda agree with Shin about the synth at 2.59 tho. It does break up the mellow vibes you had built up. Once that synth finishes, the tune is back on track and the melodies are absolutely excellent again, imo.
Man, the second half of this tune is pure sweetness, it makes me do this...
Yep, I agree with Shin again about it having too much limiting/compression cos its sounding grainy and gritty when it gets loud.
The is deffo one of the best tunes I've heard on here for a while.
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I think the atmos sounds feel a bit separated from the rest of the track.Mabey beef up the drums a bit and tone down the effects some.I do hear a compression like you were saying.
good intro, atmos are cool, some of the percussion is a little too high, really fizzy and bright, could be toned down a little,
drop at 1:29 is nice, doesn't really fit the intro though, cuz it suddenly gets a little dark, nice bass, jus a little out of place imo, drums are nice and rolling, a tad too much high end but that might be limiting pumpin it too much, a nice bit of eq on the master channel could tone that down,
nice synth in 2nd part of tune, around 3:00, that synth fits the bass well, nice and dark with a kinda trancey twist. maybe a feew more drums varaitions would break things up a little, stop it getting reptitive,
again the outro cuases a change in the vibe too suddenly, it would work, jus with more of a build-up/ build down to it.
nice work overall tho, drop at 3:00 = spot on!
like the intro, man ur really good at creating atmosphere with these sounds - engineered to perfection! love the drop, bass is really full and warm
really nice crisp leads as per ur usual 3:00 switchover is a bit sudden - could do with maybe like an 8 bar transition to get there so it flows better?
yeah like Shin said the guitar is really cool - i wanna hear that more too please! the pads around here i like too - emotional
im sure u'll sort out the compression thing, as it is noticeable in this version - sort that out and ur there dude!
ps did u write this tune a bird or sumthin? some bird withreally intoxicating, hypnotising eyes?
