 GeeZZ - The Wall |
GeeZZ
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Registration Date: 31-03-2007
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Please check out my new track 'The Wall' and post your comments here!
reviews gratfully recieved
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25-06-2008 17:48 |
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Krisch 
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Registration Date: 19-02-2008
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I like the intro. The drums are sound quite good. This sub is too low, and the track needs a higher freq bass sound i think. The synth whats come in at 5:47 needs some distortion or more high end i dont know i just dont like it this way.
Overall its not bad to a preview. Keep on working.
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25-06-2008 22:56 |
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Sephiroth
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intro synth is good, nice and twisted, pads are cool too. good build up, filtered drums fit well.
drums are pretty clear, kick and snare have their place in the mix, nice synth work too, builds the track up well.
drop is a little dissapointing after intro, not enough bass to make the drop sound powerful, drums are nice but defo needs some mid range bass.
some sweet changes in pace with the drums too, liking that idea a lot i.e. breakdown at 3:00.
decent track overall, bigger mid range bass and would make it sound loads better i reckon.
nice work!
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26-06-2008 02:46 |
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2clix
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Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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Yeah yeah I like this track its got loads of potential, 3:18 synth sounds dirty dirty bro how'd you make it?
not digging the fast hats in this track...I think that hissing sound is hats, but your drums all in all in this sound pretty good 2:31 sick half time like to hear more of that personally but thats personal pref., switch the hats and whatever everybody else said and voila, man the synths in this are addicting, im sure you know that though
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27-06-2008 04:29 |
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Shinyuri
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Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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Easy now
2nd what the seph man says! personally i would like harder more in ur face drums on this one. when those toms come in it sounds a bit like "whoa, where they come from?" unless u beef up the main beat a bit.
intro is some nice shizzle tho
peace
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27-06-2008 05:58 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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In general, not bad. The beats are excellent. Really fat and heavy. I'm not really feeling the melodies tho. I dunno, they just didn't inspire me I'm afraid. I'd agree with the Clix man about the super-fast hi hats. They are a bit strange and out of place.
Structure wise, it deffo needs some work I reckon. There's too many changes going on in one track I reckon, especially with all the melody changes and the amount of different samples being used.
The track has potential. Like I said, I love the beats but the melodies and structure still need work, imo.
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27-06-2008 20:03 |
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GeeZZ
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Originally posted by 2clix
3:18 synth sounds dirty dirty bro how'd you make it?
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soz took so long 2 ansewer no internet at my yard,
so it was just in two detuned saw waves in styrus (fl plug in) i put a low pass filta (fruity filter)with an lfo on the cut off, with about 70% resonance
already had themelody so i looped that part in the song with everything playing aong (drums+bassline) and tweaked with the lfo speed till it got it sounding just right.
LFO technique in fl studio:
to lfo the cut off i linked the cut off knob to an automation clip then on the channel settings clicked lfo
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18-07-2008 15:47 |
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