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2clix 2clix is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Death With A Side Order Of Suicide' and post your comments here!


Started working on this yesterday, havent finished writing it, but I think ima scrap it/
finish, no finish, that is the question.

ohh and I'll get to reviewing shortly after I get settled in with this new job (vitamin sales) and thanks to all that have voted and commented on my previous workings,
.be is the best Big Grin and have a happy 4th of july Drink Rasta


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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by 2clix: 25-06-2008 07:26.

25-06-2008 07:04
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sounded kind of weird to me...don't know if that was the aim.

didn't vote because got too many mixed reactions...

nuttin much to say...weird track

Confused

as its a prev...if u do decide to finish it ...guess the drums need some eq-ing they sound kind of very back there imo

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25-06-2008 10:53 Homepage of walcor
Krisch Krisch is a male
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If the question is finish it or not. I vote to finish.
I miss the low end from that one. The beats are ok i think.
The tracks are fighting for space in the mix. Needs some eqing.
25-06-2008 12:50 Homepage of Krisch
2clix 2clix is a male
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Originally posted by walcor
sounded kind of weird to me...don't know if that was the aim.

didn't vote because got too many mixed reactions...

nuttin much to say...weird track

Confused

as its a prev...if u do decide to finish it ...guess the drums need some eq-ing they sound kind of very back there imo


haha yea its 2 days work so I havent paid that much attention to it eq, level wise, its pretty much shit right now but the aim was to sound pretty strange and out of the ordinary as im really not that concerned with dance floor oriented tunes.
I think its gonna get a complete makeover, so i'll finish it, maybe I can get a moddy to delete this one till I finish it completely.

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25-06-2008 16:06
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Yeah not bad mate. What's lacking for me right now tho is some drive. You've got a decent beat but there's not much driving it forward because the melodies and basslines are not distinct enough... ahh, I've got to 2.16 and I can now hear a cool bassline melody. Big Grin I like the punky feel to it, very nice. If this was my track I'd deffo develop those punk melodies. The chanting is a little strange, although with a bit of EQing they could sound sweet. I would suggest that you try to reduce some of the background noise. It's quite distracting and it's sapping energy from the tune. Also, turn up the beats and like I said, bring those melodies forward and give them clarity.

My vote would be to finish it. There's enough interest and craziness there to produce a nice decent tune. I'd say it was about 60% finished right now, but it's got potential.

Keep 'em coming gangsta. Afro

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25-06-2008 19:13 Homepage of Tomos
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orchestral samples nice but the whole thing sounds messy
that fuzzy synth is off tune not sure how much of that is intentioned

n absolutly no bass line for me sux

beats r tight
25-06-2008 21:11
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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likin the beats, some wierd atmos and pads but it fits the vibe of the track, some nice drums edits and varaitions. loving that monk choir sample! where did you get that from!!?
track could use some work on the structure, intro is really long and the arrangment could be a little tighter.
not too keen on the bass, lacks a warm low end and is a bit messy and fuzzy.
beats are pretty good but its a bit of a mess to be honest....

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26-06-2008 02:38 Homepage of Sephiroth
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Yep I know the skinny, chalk this one up to trial and error, my apologies for waisting your time listening to such a masterpiece in the making Tongue will do better with the second FULL mix but seriously deletion of this, kinda ashamed of the score, kinda like getting a d.u.i., dont really want this on my record ya dig Frown

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26-06-2008 05:26
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