easy now - man i wish i had ur skills when i was 14, barstard ;p
cool shit here, melodies are sweet as, lots of sweet samples here and there, all flows nice imo. quite dramatic when it drops, not feeling that filtered hihat sweep thing before the drop - sounds a bit high imo. hahaha what happened at the end boss?! anyways the drums, need more beef. layer them up more me rekons, the programming is good but they just need more presence imo.
great stuff here, finish it!
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I like the horror soundtrack like intro. The beats are up front but it have to stand out a bit more i think. The bassline is cool. I dont like your synth sounds. I dont know those just could be better. At the end of the clip whre you are playing with pitch thats just the end of this demo. I hope so
After all i like this tune, good work.
Cool build-up! It makes me feel like its gonna drop into a big, industrial tune... oohhh, it almost does at 1.10.
Wicked selection of sounds in the intro, it's geling very nicely so far. Can't really offer any improvements yet.
OK, the drop at 1.45 is a little disappointing. You had built up so much energy and tension during the intro that I was expecting it to drop like a bomb. Don't get me wrong, it's still very good, but a small injection of extra energy would be nice. Perhaps you could add some shakers and rides and get those beats rolling a bit harder because they sound a little empty at that point.
The drop at 2.45 is better, that's what I'm talking about. This has more energy now. Nice work.
Love the way the melodies build-up! Very trancey but never cheesy. Deffo feelin it.
Yeah, I dunno what you were thinking about with the ending there.
It's confusing, I'm not sure what you're trying to do.
Good work so far bud. The only thing I really don't like about this tho is the fact that you're 14 and you're making me feel like a miserable, washed-up old bastard.
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nice pads, 2nd note sounds a little too high tho, pitch is off, intro bass is too overpowering, very low-end needs sorting with some eq, try taming it a bit, roll of below like 40hz and slightly reduce below around 80hz, very strong.
build up good, nice filtering, drop a bit too sudden. like the bell synth melody, very epic. drop jus seems a little empty after an epic build up, a bit dissapoiting....more drum layers and everything beefed up a bit and fatter bass would set it off more. 2nd drop with the gated synth is sweet as, nice work their. nice idea with the ending but its not really pulled off, jus sounds out of place and happens way too suddenly.
overall mix is pretty clear but needs fatter bass on the drop.
but for someone whos 14....fair play! you got so much time on your side to develop your sound...nice stuff indeed!
man maybe u should take a break from producing - ur so young - give us oldies some time to catch up otherwise ur gna get too good too fast! lol :p only playin mate
yup nice atmos in the start, cool pads, i like 1:20 withthe synth teasing as it comes in
very nice melodies indeed, really used to like technoey / trancey stuff when i was younger, this is bringin back memories!
its all about 2:57!! like that switch - building the emotions very well there my friend!
haha like the way u finished it
overall , really feelin the melodies, u defo have a good ear for music and really impressed with all the melodies u always come up with.
yup beat needs more layering dude - thats the main thing u need to sort out but also i think u could try n start getting ur basses a bitmore prominent. heavy bass + heavy beats + ur wicked melodies will = sick tune
very nice melodies indeed, really used to like technoey / trancey stuff when i was younger, this is bringin back memories!