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Greyone Greyone is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Evil' and post your comments here!

made this today Smile
No vocals and edits yet (pauzes in the track)
Not mastered , just a limiter on the master channel

If this isn't the most evil track you ever heard then its your second Big Grin hehe

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finished version this week
22-06-2008 23:06
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drums in the intro sound really good, love the techness along with that pad / could make for a tune itself if they were stronger

then the beating commences Devil

that screaming synth is out of this world. you know this could be the music of my preference if only it could be more melodic. dont know for sure can it be done?

otherwise missing a chilled/more melodic part, the intro synth isn't really working with the heavy beats as a transition

it is fucking heavy when it drops but the intro and what sounds like a super long outro sound like two different tunes.

otherwise these are your best synth works ever

keep at it - waiting for the final thing Drummer

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23-06-2008 08:46 Homepage of cynik
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hahaha! would love how to c u work. is it anything like this....

http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=CrtlQKWvs3...feature=related

anyways, the tune, awesome shit boss, u r definately the king of evil! always fukin amazed at the speed at which u work. i wish i could do somink so quality in such a short amount of time. only gripe i got is that maybe that bass drum is a little too dirty for me, would like to hear a slightly cleaner one on this. also some sounds pan too much for my liking, ie that string pad thing before the second big drop.

anyways, awesome shit, cant wait for the finished one.

peace

ps what the fuk with the votes??! there be some total arseburgers on ere voting down, should be a better score than this

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23-06-2008 09:05 Homepage of Shinyuri
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http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=CrtlQKWvs3...feature=related


ROFL Love it.

The intro suprised me actually. It's very melodic for you, deffo felt that section. I'd love to hear you carry that through the whole tune tbh.

OK, the drop at 1.27. Jeez, this blurs the edges between music and noise. Big Grin Maybe I'm too old cos there was a time when I'd really be into this mental-blasting-fuckerage, but now it seems too much. It's difficult to find any groove or vibe in it. That's personal pref tho, others will like this.

Ahh, the breaks at 3.52 - now that's much more funky! This is my kinda style, there's something to groove to now. The second half of the tune is much stronger imo. Some nice junglist vibes. I'd actually cut out the section from 1.27 and 3.52 and re-attached the intro to the section starting from 3.53 or 4.44. It'd cut down the tune length too, which I feel is too long right now.

Something I notice about your drops is the way the sound dips. I guess that's probably the effect of the limiter you're using. I tend to think that it ruins the drop tho cos the intensity dips. Much better to have a smaller 'verse' and a bigger 'chorus' I reckon, i.e., dynamics (shhh, don't tell Halph I said that tho Big Grin )

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23-06-2008 10:42 Homepage of Tomos
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yeah i will attach the 2nd drop as 1st , works better then...

the synth at beginning , break and outro are done with the massive , just tweaking the knobs , i wil lkeep that

more melodic , mmhz dont t hink i will make this more melodic Big Grin

i will do a bit less panning ok , cause i did this one wide stereo

thanks for the response , i count on you guys !
23-06-2008 20:08
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[quote]Originally posted by Shinyuri


http://jp.youtube.com/watch?v=CrtlQKWvs3...feature=related

YES!!!! that was sweet shin, never heard of that show Banana

I agree that the second drop would be better switched, even though im a sucker when it comes to c.v. limey style beats, you know Evil

haha I can picture tomos 5 years from now yelling at kids to get off his lawn and to turn down that devil music Hihi

Dude your massive synths are FUCKIN BRILLIANT, sickness!

so your going to fill those pauses with vocals, that'll be real good at first I was like what the fuck is this long ass pause... then I read your info

sick tune my man cant wait for the finished version Drummer

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24-06-2008 03:18
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and how is the mixdown ?
24-06-2008 11:29
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always like your stuff man. this one sounds really good. won't repeat anything others said. mix sounds ok but the way i hear it, in the part @ about 3.25 the synth is very loud and kills the drums. other issue i have is @3.49 the chilled out part (cool part by the way) and 4.55 the ride bells seem too loud or too dirty to me. prob what ur goin 4 though. also on a personal preference note which should be disregarded: the snare sounds weird, some low mids in there i would soften maybe, not bad though. this is a great tune, wish I could make em this good. hope to hear the finished version
25-06-2008 00:13
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25-06-2008 00:25
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quote:
Originally posted by Greyone
thanks for the replies , i decided to keep the structure (hard/soft) , drop the intro and make it more dark , ...

im making the tune finished this week , i started adding more effects and making it more evil , its gonna be nasty...

also cleaned up the drums a bit

when this one is finished ... Devil i will make you aware
25-06-2008 00:26
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leathal! the drop is awsome as in this tune, cant realy say much more than whats already said.

i am also amazed at how fast u work tho, u write all of those breaks in one day? and the structure? canny fast that wor laddy, nice work tho, definatly a stomper!

the string at 6:27 are panned a bit much for me aswell tho, maybe cause of got headphone on tho.

f'in awsome track tho!

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25-06-2008 01:20 Homepage of SI-FI
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intro is evil as, crazy sounds, well put together. drums and nice and big, kick really punch's, drums are really intense, not really my cup of tea at all but they sure as hell make an impact, nice and clear too, nice edits and fills/ variations, keep things fresh and creates a break from the madness. bass sounds nice and big, nice use of filters/ automation etc. mix in general is pretty good, nice and big. sounds like the limiter might be pushing everything a little too much tho, mix needs turning down a bit before going through limiter, can hear it at occasions, like tomos said, 2nd section sounds a little detached from the first, nice variations tho, gives it a different twist.
overall mix is pretty clear, jus needs turning down a tad before going through limiter, tomos mentioned their are occasional dips in sound, prob cuz limiter is acting too much.
not really my style but nice production and clean mix, sweet work!

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ez geez

lovin 1:33 - hectic bizness guanin!! nice drums man, really thumpin thru my headphones! fuckin heavy and dark like some of ur stuff i've heard before!

likin all the industrial synths uv got here, really adding to the whole vibe

think evil is an understatement!!!!!!!

3:30 nice amen layering, (i love amens)

4:30 - this is what im talkin about!!! thats all i have to say! respect, this must have been really teious with them beat variations on FL huh?

5:51 really like that lead

can't wait to ehar the vocals once uv put em in!

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