whooa! mental sounds!! stuff to rave in a white padded cell too! goes well wiv ur pic!!
have to give u respect for trying somink different than the rest here. that first synth is a little too mental for my taste. it would confuse and frighten me in a rave!!! there is a higher lead noise which comes over it in the intro which sounds a little bit too much like its random distortion but having said that when the drums come in and the main bass goes on it works well. the drums are nice and punchy when they first come in, they kind of lose their punch when the other synths come in tho, could do with more trik eqing on all the sounds to stop that from happening.
weird sounds but after a few listens i kind of like it. a bit too random sounding when u first hear it tho. nuff respect for trying somink mental tho.
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you sick puppy. thats some seriously deranged stuff in the intro, makes me wonder what to expect
then it starts, a bit dissapointingly normal beats
strange structure, the way it slides into dnb all of a sudden, not really working. it does sound cool when it goes, it's just so totally different from the intro
heavy swinged beats would go crazy with this loose sound of the synths.
dunno really, cant say its really bad but I dont really like it either, sounds realtively good, some of the synths are a tad casioish - suggest dirtying the suckers up.
Thx for the revs. Its very raw yet. The intro is unfinished it wont remain in this way. Posted just because I would to know which way should i go on with this. Your opinion will be considered and then i keep on workin according to them(maybe)
Cynik: what do you mean on normal beats?
by normal I mean the standard two step thing you got going. I expected some mental chopping shizz to slam.
re-reading my review it seems I was a bit harsh on it. the tune itself is really not that bad, just work more on them ideas more. beats are cool too, but could use as I said, swingier beats
Strange intro! I'm not really feelin it tbh, I think it's a little too strange on it's own. I love the bassline tho! Definitely a body-movement-inducing groove to that.
It sounds a little too loud compared to the beats tho. Or maybe the beats are too quiet compared to the bass. They are quite far back in the mix. I'd try layering them with a loop - perhaps with hi-pass - to fill them out and get them rolling more. With a solid, fat beat this could be a great tune.
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I dont thought that your review was harsh. Maybe because of my bad english
I dont like "abnormal" beats too much but i will try that to the track.
There is only one thing i can be sure that i wont change and this is the "strange" synth sound in the intro. I love it
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Krisch: 23-06-2008 18:44.
ez Krisch finally managed to get my arse down the internet cafe! soz late review
intro straight out the asylum!!!! some psycho shit right here!
id love to take an acid trip n listen to this (in my younger days ofcourse! lol) - spoon me out!
likin the madness of it all - i do actually like that lead man, think that it could be varied a bit every 8 or 16 bars (more notes or possibly use another synth and vary with that to make a lil surprise here n there)
beat could benefit from possibly one more layer i reckon.
overall great idea man, think variation on beats and melody (plus one more synth) are key to gettin this one into a finished product
intro straight out the asylum!!!! some psycho shit right here!
id love to take an acid trip n listen to this (in my younger days ofcourse! lol) - spoon me out!
likin the madness of it all - i do actually like that lead man, think that it could be varied a bit every 8 or 16 bars (more notes or possibly use another synth and vary with that to make a lil surprise here n there)
You should to wait for the finished version with that acid trip
I'd to hear your tune with that lead
It sounds a little too loud compared to the beats tho. Or maybe the beats are too quiet compared to the bass. They are quite far back in the mix. I'd try layering them with a loop - perhaps with hi-pass - to fill them out and get them rolling more. With a solid, fat beat this could be a great tune.
