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secondopinion secondopinion is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Need Your Life' and post your comments here!

just a couple of days old was feeling a bit down in the dumps so i put this together hope ya like

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21-06-2008 13:02
Ketz Ketz is a male
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big up the Ashford massive! Big Grin

that beat is slightly reminiscent of ur last track - i like Bigup

nice choppy hihats in the intro, and that piano defo creating a nice vibe with those melodies

the arp is slightly dry for my liking

vocal is sweet, fits well with the other elements

my one criticsm is that the track flows alright, but i kinda feel a lil let down with the drop, as from the start u feel like the emotions and energy is building, but by the time the tune is rolling, its kinda lost momentum

the bass at 3:15 - keep that sustained!! and going for your drop, when u only use it in bits the track loses that energy

mate, some really good ideas in this tune, get the arrangement worked over a bit and keep that flow goin, this could be a sick track

both ur tunes so far, defo likin ur vibe Big Grin





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21-06-2008 13:18 Homepage of Ketz
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Yep, nice stuff. Love that break, reminds me of the older MetalHeadz stuff for some reason. Lots of cool elements in this tune. But what it lacks is some meat in the low-mids. Seems a little empty in that region right now. You could deffo turn the bass and the background pads up. Vocal is nice. A little repetitive tho, so don't overdo it. You've got the right idea with the bass stabs and the arp but like Ketz said, they are a bit dry. Also, the tune does loses a bit of momentum and energy after the drop. But it's still a nice tune mate, lots of cool stuff going on in there.

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22-06-2008 10:18 Homepage of Tomos
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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easy now, wow cool clean drums, nice eq work on this one. have to agree with the one like the ketz and tomos, some bits are a little surprising and a little disjointed but with a few effects and twiddles itll be sweet.

respect for this style tho, im liking the sounds overall. good quality stuff. btw what is that vocal saying?

peace

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23-06-2008 08:18 Homepage of Shinyuri
secondopinion secondopinion is a male
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i think (lol) its sayin" i dont need your life ill breathe without you"

cheers for feedback on point as always guys best get on finishing this one

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23-06-2008 09:04
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