yo, digging this one. The guitar riff is really nice and it gives the track a nice feeling. The off time break is great! Really nothing to complain about. I like this kind of stuff!
Drums don't roll too well in some bars (especially intro). Need fixing. Bass is to silent, the guitarish instrument is too loud. Good atmosphere. Track needs extra power in the drum area in the main part. This has a lot of good elements, it just needs to be worked out the right way.
Would not say no to a remix (especially if it would be FL studio).
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eazy mate. nice off-beat break in the intro - likin that
guitar is quite eerie (not sure if anyone else already mentioned that!) as is the vocal, think you could have a nice dark / ambient pad depending on where u wanna take this tune, personally i'd prefer dark!
haha like the bassline that kinda comes out to peep at ya in the middle of those breaks! good choice of bass sounds as well - im feelin those!
beat needs more layers, kick really needs to thump, and once the tune has dropped, the beat needs to flow a lot more than it is at the mo (i think that off beat break is cool for the intro but best to get more of a roller once you get past the drop
overall, in terms of vibe, im really likin this!!! more please (and make sure u add to this tune as i reckon its got loads and loads of potential!
Agree with the other comments so far. The mix definitely needs beefing up but all the essential ingredients for a wicked tune are there. Love that guitar sample and those vocals are excellent too. Have you got Krust's album Coded Language? This tune would fit very nicely on that album. Like Ketz said, you deffo need to think about getting a bigger, thumpy kick. The snare is a tad weak too. It's got the right sound but it's just a little quiet and too far back in the background. The basses need a boost too with some deeper frequencies. But all in all, this tune has big potential! Deffo feelin this.
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cheers boys feedback got me thinkin new mixdown and i got just the right kick for it
should have a new snare of one of me other things thats quite snappy but not in the highs thankin you muchley
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ooooh, me likes, definate cool eiree feelin on this one, cant really add much to what has been said (have to agree with most of the comments) except that i am waiting for the remastered one!
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