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BESHAI 
Beshai
Registration Date: 17-05-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Purpose' and post your comments here!
Made this tune last nite june 14th 2008 finished it up this morning.
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15-06-2008 20:35 |
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filterphunk
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Registration Date: 24-06-2007
Posts: 9
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Sax sounds,and that stab in the background are tonnaly correct with the bassline /each other.
Overall sound is ok.
The whole thing gets too boring at the end ,theres not much goin on ,the same motive plays for the 5 mins.
cheers.
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16-06-2008 09:43 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Some odd instrument choices. The sax lick doesn't fit at all imo. It's a totally jazzy element in a techstep tune.
Tune gets really repetitive after a while, some major changes throughout should prevent that.
Mixdown needs an exiter for the high end, touch of reverb maybe.
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16-06-2008 09:46 |
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nice bouncy thing you have there mate not sure on the clarinet at the drop dosent sound like it fits right with the vibe of the tune.the beats sound quite snappy and tight but reckon you could add some
different edits to give it a bit more groove.
the bassline is good and rolling but again a bit of diversity in its arrangement would giv the tune mor life overall tho an enjoyable listen keep it up bro
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16-06-2008 11:18 |
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rez
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Registration Date: 15-04-2008
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hmm the first half of the sax loop is okay, second one doesnt fit at all imo. bass is nice, the effects too. maybe you could change the bass throughout the track though, so that the tune doesnt get so one-sided (or add some breaks). But besides all that, its a cool track 
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17-06-2008 03:24 |
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Shinyuri
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Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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easy now boss, loving your bline styles, drums are sweet and full, overall sound is quite large. this would work well in a mix me rekons. agree with the other comments about the clarinet sound over the drop, it could just be dropped or played just before the drop in a mini breakdown. i would prefer it if the mix was slightly clearer and smoother - the voice comes in a bit abrupt for my taste but anyways, this is generally solid stuff.
peace
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17-06-2008 08:29 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Like the others have said, there's a weird mix of sounds here. Some of it is interesting but a lot of it is clashing. The sax sounds out of tune from the bassline. Same with that Goldie-like FX. The biggest problem with this tune is that it sounds like a collection of samples. I'd love to hear more original stuff in this, it'd give you greater control over the melodies.
Not bad, but still needs a lot of work I reckon.
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23-06-2008 14:42 |
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RonaldoVetro
Ronaldo Vetro
Registration Date: 27-07-2008
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The beat in the first minute throws me off a little -- As in the volume difference between beat 2 snare (low) and beat 4 (high) is too drastic. I see what you're trying to do but I think it could be a little more subtle. Rest of the rhythm section is good, but could use some hats or shakers or some sort of percussion thing up top thinning out the gaps.
The bass is rollin! It could use a little more omph though. At first I was thinking more low end. Def. agree with Ketz on that one though. Add in a sub bass on the drop. Add in some hats to keep it rollin along. Phat Bass with plenty of lows, Nice beat, needs some high end (hi hats or something) to fill out the frequency range.
I love the damage breaks though! Very pro sounding. So far so good.
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04-08-2008 21:02 |
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