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Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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Please check out my new track 'D2tb' and post your comments here!

easy now dnb.be heads

this is somink ive been bashing out recently, prize goes to the one who guesses the origin of the name!

once again, made on reason 3 - i have got reason 4 now but it was done a while ago (not really liking no.4 tbh)

anyways, as always, comments are greatly appreciated. peace

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14-06-2008 09:21 Homepage of Shinyuri
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez Shinster! Big Grin nice vocals in the intro - like the chopped up / delay bits! woah dark bouncey bass from 0:45!! Also like the filter effects, create a nice sweeping sound Bigup

in terms of the drums - so far so good, I reckon some of the hihats could be more prominent tho (the ones on the 1st half of each bar if u know the ones im talking about - either boost em or layer? just a suggestion)

in terms of the structure - i reckon that bassline comes in too early, reckon that u need to have more of an intro, then a breakdown, strip the drums out and bring the bass in on its own, proper build-up and then BAM drop!!

definately feelin this one so far mate, lovin the heaviness of it all! and in ur signature style too Wink

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14-06-2008 10:18 Homepage of Ketz
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Ahh, there's no better feeling than waking up in the morning and finding a new Shinyuri tune in the .be player. Big Grin This is definitely trademark Shinyuri shizzle. Trademark beat sound and pattern, a dominant lead bass, loads of filtering going on, beat fills all over the place, bass edits every couple of bars, lots of fx... this is a very decent tune mate.

Love those filtered vocals in the intro. They definitely add another dimension to the track.

But I'd agree with Ketz about the hi hats. If they were a little more prominent they'd deffo add rollyness to the beats. I'd actually like to hear some rides during the drop too? I think they would add energy into the tune and let you know when to really get your booty shaking. This tune sounds like it's in four gear ready to give it the beans and go into fifth... but it never quite picks up enough speed and power to change gear.

The bass is very impressive. Tonnes of textural (is that a word?... yes, it is I just checked the dico) sexiness. I reckon it needs an extra synth in there tho cos the bass is sounding a bit loney at times. An extra synth melody would sound nice to bounce off the bass melody.

Beats are your signature sound. I know you occassionally get peeps saying they don't like that snare sound, but I love it.

Overall, a nice tune indeed. With a few more edits and additions, it could be great.

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14-06-2008 11:01 Homepage of Tomos
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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kick and snare are really overpumped for my taste. The track is really nice though. Could do with a more jump up oriented bassline to make the dancefloor explode. But that's just taste.

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14-06-2008 11:10 Homepage of BattleDrone
SI-FI SI-FI is a male
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awsome feel for this one! nice mix overall. the kick sits nicely in the mix with the bass.

the filterd lead sound for me has a bit to much res on it but thats jus my personal taste.

the vocal sample works awsome to, that along with the stompin beats give it a nice dillinja feel to it.

definatly a stomper this one tho, cool fills aswell, keeps ya well interested

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15-06-2008 14:14 Homepage of SI-FI
Sephiroth Sephiroth is a male
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intro is well put together, builds up nicely, vocal is lush, nic work there.
bass sweep is phat, bass sound is pretty nice, maybe tone down the filters a tad and gritty it up a bit more,
tune jus sounds like its ready to drop into something intense any 2nd but it never quite happens, maybe a drop with another drum element (rides/ tambs etc) and some realy heavy sub rolling along would really get things going.
mix is all good, snare sounds a little muffled tho, maybe a snappier sound layered to it would help it hit a little harder.
good stuff tho, potential to be a absolute banger!

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16-06-2008 11:34 Homepage of Sephiroth
Acoustiks Acoustiks is a male
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Great track. Killer bassline. I think that the break could have been a bit heavier and had some more elements to it. I also feel that the break is a teensy bit too loud.

Overall it's great, I love the atmosphere and feel of the song!
16-06-2008 20:05
filterphunk filterphunk is a male
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Good piecie of dnb ,I've only had some thoughts on bassline - i think it should hit a bit lower on cutoff ,plus some better distortion could have been applied (u use reason ,so why not use 'scream' - if u did already,try maybe to mess with it a bit more). Also the subbass could play 0/5 octave higher - it hits mainly around 40hz - sure its great on subs ,but transposed it could be audible on other systems too.

All in all ,nice sound. Try to develop the arrangement and make that bassline kick harder.

cheers
18-06-2008 07:45
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