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cynik cynik is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Murder Love' and post your comments here!


done on reason4 alone

not really sure on the style. but take a listen and share your opinnions cause I really put some ideas and work into this as opposed to the last two tunes I upped

cheers

edit: forgot to bigup ethex for using one of his loops - cheers mate Drummer


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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by cynik: 13-06-2008 01:12.

13-06-2008 01:08 Homepage of cynik
2clix 2clix is a male
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No doubt props to ethex on the breaks pack, full of sickness.

So this one is kinda eveywhere bruv, you def. put alot of effort into this one and you can hear it with the minor subtleties in the edits, but theres alota things going wrong with the structure and the bass kinda just jumps outta nowhere at times.
the first break seemed like there was to much going on, I like the half time stuff though I think alot of tracks benefit from it.
This is def right up my alley though I try to achieve the same kind dark craziness with most of my tunes.
I would say this track needs some more attention
but it has great potential
peace bruv

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13-06-2008 01:46
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Very nice mids. Powerfull snares ftw Big Grin

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13-06-2008 09:32
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think the intro needs a bit more in it if its gonna stay that long.different edits on the drums and some sort of melody underneath so the lead line isnt as expected as it is when it drops. like the drop tho loads of edits in this but not in the intro strange that,like the switch up and the percussion but reckon the sample at 4.42 could be used to good effect as a breakdown at the end to bring in the next 16 every now and then.apart from that the levels sound quite good and you have some good ideas in there nice one

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13-06-2008 12:18
cynik cynik is a male
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cheers mate, just the kind of review I need. Thanks to the others for the listen.
any more takers?

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13-06-2008 14:23 Homepage of cynik
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Intro sounds really fresh, well done. Was expecting iy to drop around 50" but it didn't. The intro is either too long or the main part lacks a bit power, especially the kick and snare don't push through.

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13-06-2008 20:40 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Definitely a unique style, I wouldn't know what to call it either tbh. Like Battle said tho, the kick and snare are just not punching through enough right now. It's a shame cos this tune could sound really heavy with some fat, thumping snares and kicks. Also, like clixy said, the basslines sometimes kinda pop out of nowhere and the structure is a bit hit-and-miss. Although you've probably spent more time on this one than the other previous two (both of which I reviewed... do ya fancy a reciprocal review of me new 'un Living Under the Ice Wink ), it's your previous tune - Murder Love - which sounds more structured and 'together'. There's some quite good stuff going on with the crunchy, squelshy bassline tho. The sound is nice.

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13-06-2008 21:26 Homepage of Tomos
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easy, mad ass drummin! like all the ideas floating about on this one, agree with the previous comments on this specially thinking thatit was going to drop sooner, this is only my opinion but i rekon for the drop you should lose all the mad drumming and have a fast but simpler beat going on - when you do that as well, turn the drums up so they have more punch too. have the mad ass drumming for the end of 16 bar sequence or somink. otherwise it sounds abit like its a constant intro. anyways - i just got reason 4 and i think its a pain in the bottom, so respekt for using it!

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14-06-2008 07:47 Homepage of Shinyuri
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cool drum programming from the start! kinda chaotic vibe - sum crazy shit right here! Big Grin

think the drums may need to be a bit punchier like the dudes above said..

likin the reese from 1:40, wicked beats from 1:50! loads of energy in this one, for the nutters out there!! i'd like to hear that reese a bit more melodic (just a personal thing)

in terms of structure, a little haphazard maybe, sumthin more conventional would work really really well here thigs flow a lot better towards the end - thats what i reckon u should use earlier on for the first drop

good work man Big Grin

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14-06-2008 11:06 Homepage of Ketz
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