 SI-FI - So Good |
SI-FI 
Producer DJ Obbsessed
Registration Date: 27-03-2008
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Please check out my new track 'So Good' and post your comments here!
made this on logic and reason 3 bout a month ago.
i have some small problems with it but overall i think its finished.
any criticism is welcome cheers
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10-06-2008 12:11 |
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Shinyuri
myspace.com/shinyuribeats
Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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easy boss, nice little number this one, i could imagine bopping to this down the street with a kebab in one hand and doing the gun finger point with me other hand at random passers by.
i like the choice of sounds in there - theres a real cool sounding bass going under the hazardish lead, nice work. sounds really clean, maybe just a tiny bit too clean tho.. would like to hear some other samples and sfx to help bulk it up. faster drums would be cool too. the breakdown is a little too empty at the mo, the filtered drums stay filtered for too long imo.
anyways, all that said, i like the vibe on this one. cool little groover
peace
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10-06-2008 13:49 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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I'd pretty much agree with everything Shin said (mine would have to be a veggie kebab tho 
), the only thing I would add is that the beats sound really, really thin. You should deffo think about layering them up a bit to get them rolling. Atm, they pretty much consist of a few hi hats, a snare and a kick. They need more beef and presence.
Like Shin said, you've made a good choice of sounds. The structure is pretty good but I reckon the breakdown is too long. Not a bad tune tho.
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10-06-2008 19:06 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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1 instrument sounds a bit off (beepy synth, sorry, can't describe it any better.
Like the style, maybe it's a bit too layed back. Try to get some wildness into it.
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10-06-2008 23:35 |
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grit
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Registration Date: 08-06-2008
Posts: 5
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Thought the intro was good, like the use of the sample,build up as well. When it drops it seems to be missing something..bassline is not heavy enough for me
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11-06-2008 09:17 |
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HAMANN
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 27-10-2007
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Clownsteppa
I think the tune needs some distortion and limitation to sound more "hazardly".Listen his tracks and u will understand what i mean. I d like to listen pumped version 
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11-06-2008 23:13 |
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rez
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 15-04-2008
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the bass and all the other sounds are pretty cool, a lot of variation, nice ideas, bass could be a little bit louder. i agree with grit, the track lacks some power, i expected it to boom after it drops, maybe add some sub? the drums are simple, but i like them, they work well with the rest 
the build-up is nice, imo there could be much more stuff in the whole track though. oh and at 3:25, why not make the breakish snares louder? i think it would sound great with them being in the rest of the track.
overall a really cool tune, i like the melody, kinda catchy
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