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the boingy synth in the intro, sounds a bit disjointed when u first hear it but when the drums kik in it sounds proper bo, love tunes which do that. good bass stabs kiking in here and there, would love to see how a crowd would react to this one. the drums could be a little tighter on the eqing side, but ill let u off cos it was done on headphones at night (thats how i do most of my tunes...
) some of the samples could be a notch louder - theres a man saying somink - i would like to hear that a bit more tho. anyways, cool shit, liking the vibe on this one.
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09-06-2008 07:40 |
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cynik
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cheers, deffo there are level and eq issues, thing is my PC crashed and all I installed is reason and lame encoder 
should get on it in the next coupla days to sidechain and whatnot through ableton, as far as ideas go anyone else got any comments?
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09-06-2008 12:06 |
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Greyone
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yo cynik
wicked strange start , sounds like minimal but very nice. nice bassblending cynikstyle.
dont liek the change of drums sometimes...
overal feeling is nice , structure could be better
break in middle a bit longer
otherwise its good
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09-06-2008 23:35 |
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grit
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Like the filtered sweepy bass sounds, Like the way it's brought in.. Not overly keen on the beat, would like to hear what a punchier one sounded like with the tune
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11-06-2008 09:13 |
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cynik
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11-06-2008 12:52 |
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Sephiroth
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i like the bouncy synth in the intro, real techy.
some nice bass work at around 45 secs, almost sounds old skool and jungly at this point. gives the track a nice bouncy feel.
overall it could do with some eq work to give the drums a bit more punch, a harder snare sound would help things roll a little better too.
nice, original track tho, good to sum1 trying sumthing a bit different, kinda reminds me of old skool teebee this tune, good stuff.
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11-06-2008 16:02 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, pretty good stuff. Get's a little messy and over-layered at times for me, especially the beats, but it's certainly no bad tune. Like Shin already said, some EQing is needed on the beats to tighten them up.
The bass is probably the best thing about this tune. It's pretty impressive, although perhaps a little disjointed at times. I like the way the sound is constantly changing, and it's EDed nicely.
Structure is ok, but you could do with a breakdown in the middle of the tune to make it more dynamics. Breakdowns and build-ups are usually where the drama and excitement happens. But this tune is lacking some of that.
Overall, a good tune. Lots of potential for sure.
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13-06-2008 19:06 |
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DJ-ABOMINABLE
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Nice Tempo Breaks and Rolls 2:17 to 2:37 needs a little work. Good Job
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19-06-2008 02:15 |
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Krisch
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The drum structure are cool but the beats need more power. The buildup is good. The synth sounds need more mid and maybe high freq i think.
With a good mixing and mastering it will be a great track. Finish it
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22-06-2008 17:58 |
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Binary Havoc
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Ez Cynik
Hope you doin good man
Quite a rave vibe in the intro here. Pretty cool stuff from the 1st drop, deffo had my head bouncing.
Think the sub may be a bit too high in the mix but everything else soundin alright
Peace
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22-06-2008 18:15 |
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I've got some time tommorow night so I'll do some