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Please check out my new track 'Uncontrollable Sadness' and post your comments here!

Havent posted anything in a while it seems

I just banged this out over the past couple days not completely done with it, still alota mistakes that need to be fixed, so if .be can help a brotha work it out it'd be a great help

FL as usual, firebird and scanned synth for me vst, and loads of samples

My cuz just broke up with his girl and now he feels superbad about it, wants her back real hard and she aint having it, so thats pretty much the inspiration behind this track
anyways enjoi

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06-06-2008 22:00
Tomos Tomos is a male
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I got your PM yesterday bro. Wink Once again, you've come up with something very unique and solid. Big Grin I liked it when I first heard it but I wasn't crazy about it. However, after about 3 more listens it has got better. It felt a little messy at first but if you listen closely there's definitely some very cool production techniques going on here. Structurally it's very tight, imo, it's got your hallmark build-ups and edits. The tune never stays stays still, something is always changing.

The only thing this tune is lacking is some heaviness in the low-mid range. The kick and snare are good but they're a tad thin right now. So too are the bass stabs. They are not quite heavy enough for a tune like this. But you're on the right lines with them.

I'm deffo feelin this tho. It has the potential to be a big tune. You know I'm a big fan of your stuff man and this little number is no exception. Big Grin

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07-06-2008 10:01 Homepage of Tomos
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Main bass drowns in the SFX... bring it up front.
Some drum variations sound really robotic.

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07-06-2008 10:25 Homepage of BattleDrone
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Clear intro sounds, that laugh is awesome
haha, shit all the sounds fit perfectly
that kick comin is lovely, catchy beat
would prefer a mor etight one but sounds all good mastered, ithink an more tight beat is commin. very dubbystyle style. Sick productions man love tha bass. See the struggling in getting her back in the track, hah
the distorted mind
greetz man


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07-06-2008 14:14 Homepage of tryptech
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I think the drums need to move more into the foreground. The amen fill at 3:33 sounded good but was too low. The leads/bass and everything work well together. I like that little synth scale kind of thing you got there. It's very DJ Hazard-esque to me (one of my favourite drum n bass artists). I like the whole other-worldly feel of the song - very unique. There is a vocal sample near the middle that I think says "sorry." I didn't like that part that much. It's a little too repetitive. Your synths and all that, however are excellent throughout. Just work on those drums and reconsider some of those vocals. Good luck with future versions.
08-06-2008 01:32
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easy, first one im hearing from you, this is some sik sounding shit boss! evil weird atmos intro - u must be a sik bastard to come up with this stuff - i once knew a guy who would shoot kittens with his bb gun to get evil inspiration, u do anything like that? anyways, production wise, i agree with the other comments but sound choice and design, u r getting top points. good stuff. yeh, where did u get that laugh sample and what effects u put on it?

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09-06-2008 05:53 Homepage of Shinyuri
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Yo thanks for the comments guys, ya the kick and the snare are def. to thin atm, i'll layer em up a bit more and crush those bass stabs, amen @ 3:33 forgot to layer that one, maybe just lazy Tongue trimmed the vocal "sorry" not so repetitive now. wasnt to excited with the robotic drum edits either, changed.

@ shin haha ya but I use a 12 gauge and a kitty catapult....PULL.... meow?
the laugh I just found on y.tube along with the other vocs, threw the laugh in the slicer tweaked it to my liking to give it a unique feel, cloned it twice and pitched one down and the other up, gives it that evil sound, no other effects

thanks for the reviews guys will make more changes hopefully for the better and repost in the next couple days
BIG UP .BE Big Grin

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09-06-2008 18:45
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this is one helluva chune bro. that half time is on point and adds flava to the track. love those edits too. that sample at
10-06-2008 19:33
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build-up is nice. arragement and edits are nice, with some nice prdocution through-out.
kick and snare sound a little thin in my opinion, seem to be drowned out by the fx, too many fx in my opinion.
nice tune overall tho, drums jus need to brought foreward i reckon.

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11-06-2008 16:15 Homepage of Sephiroth
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very dark industrial kinda feeling with the sounds uv used in the intro! murdera!!! Big Grin makes me feel like slashin sumone up or sumthin with a kitchen knife lol (make that a bread knife Big Grin )

like that beat from 1:45, nice half speed stuff

yeah BD is right, bass needs to be more upfront, maybe eq the fx samples? or jus turn em down?

beat works well from 3:30 - use that idea more

cool drum edits keep this rollin that hardcore kinda stab from 4:50 is a bit dry imo, could do with sum reverb

lol love the laugh at the end Big Grin ur a madman


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14-06-2008 11:22 Homepage of Ketz
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