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InsidiousX 
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Registration Date: 07-02-2008
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Please check out my new track 'Sparta' and post your comments here!
Second track made using reason. Only got half way through production so far, so of course, this isnt the finished track so im hoping someone can give me some pointers, tips, faults or ideas for the rest of the production of the track so i can improve on it. Again, big ups .be cru, leave ur comments.
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Forget liquid, jump up and darkside drum n bass is the way forward!
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06-06-2008 15:44 |
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Gregg
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Cool! It rocks like most of your stuff… but this time it is way more listenable; loud mixdown, no muffled sounds! 
yeah I dig the sound quality. Mostly clear.
Maybe your main bassline could use some eqing so it’s not in conflict with the hats.
Intro is not bad, though I’d tweak that pad to make it more special and lively. Atm, it doesn’t sound good enough to have it play alone with the drums.
Watch out when finishing the track that you’re not gonna overuse your “this is Sparta” vocal. 
more like this!
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06-06-2008 17:51 |
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2clix
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Deff got oomph to this one!
kick maybe a tad to loud
not really feeling the main bass its too in ya face I think you could prolly find something a lil better imo
sparta sample meh... could do with some twisting as its to recognizable right now... but you really cant escape that since its SO recognizable
anyways keep it up with reason and finish it
peace bruv
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06-06-2008 18:55 |
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HAMANN
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Kick-snare are cool
Also hats give nice speed gain.
Dislike some crackling sound in the intro produced by high freqs of the kick (0:03, 0:20, etc.) and in point of view, the whole track has lack of sub bass
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06-06-2008 22:05 |
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Tomos
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This is deffo the best thing we've heard from you so far. 
The sound quality is good and the tune itself is very cool. Good melodies and solid beats. Have you used stereo panning on the master channel? If so, it sounds to me like there's probably a touch too much (sorry, couldn't resist doing that 
). Also, I think you should layer the main bassline with a sub. It's lacking a bit of depth at the mo, but it wouldn't take much to put it right. The 3xosc is good for creating sub, as you prolly know.
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07-06-2008 10:25 |
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BattleDrone
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Very good, the main bass needs to be more upfront though, it should make the crowd go nuts.
The intro sounds a bit to trance/ambient-ish compared to the jump up main part.
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07-06-2008 10:28 |
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