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Vectrex Vectrex is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Get Out' and post your comments here!

This is the first Benzin track preview, put on this site. The drums are done in FL8 with much snare samples from this great dnb producers site. After created the drum loop, I rewired FL to Ableton 7 where the synths, which are all made in albino 3, and the rest of the track is done.

First, there were pretty cool vocals too (from a coldcut - roots manuva track), but I removed them because of the copyright.

It's just a early preview, and I know I suck in EQ. There isn't much of a build-up neither but i'm just curious what you guys think of the sound.

Hope you enjoy it and hoping for some feedback ;-)

greetings, Benzin

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06-06-2008 14:44 Homepage of Vectrex
SplitMinds SplitMinds is a male
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Damn, I really like it.
Synths should be cleaner I guess but anyway I'll be waiting for the final version.
06-06-2008 17:06
2clix 2clix is a male
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Pendulum type synths are ok, im not a fan personally, to each his own aye.

needs more drum edits it to get it rolling
maybe bring that kick up a tad

not to keen on that background squeeling sound but its ok just dont overuse it when you get around to finishing this one

def. like to hear it with the vocals
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06-06-2008 18:44
Vectrex Vectrex is a male
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Thanks for the fast reply you guys! Allready working on some drum variations right now! ;-)

And indeed I would love to post it with the vocals, because it fills up the empty spaces a bit, but I won't think it would stay online very long.. ;-)

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06-06-2008 19:04 Homepage of Vectrex
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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There's too much going on all the time, you need a clear team which is strong enough to carry the track and put that upfront.
Overall sound is nice.

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07-06-2008 10:24 Homepage of BattleDrone
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Agree with Battle that there's probably 1 or 2 too many elements going on here. Also, like 2clix said, I'm not feeling that background squeeling. I think you could probably cut that out altogether, or least reduce it because it kinda gets in the way.

I like the gritty bassline and the guitar-like sounds. I reckon you should try to hang the tune on those elements by making them more dominant.

Obviously, we have no idea what the vocal sounds like but it deffo sounds like it's missing something. But my guess is that if you put a vocal over it, it's gonna sound even more crowded. But I could be wrong of course.

Overall tho, this one has potential.

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07-06-2008 10:35 Homepage of Tomos
Vectrex Vectrex is a male
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Thanks you guys! I'll keep these things in mind when I finish it ;-)

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07-06-2008 13:44 Homepage of Vectrex
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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cool shizz, waiting for the finished version - agree with all the comments above but those are easy fixes, maybe fade out the synths just before the drop for more impact? good stuff tho, peace

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09-06-2008 05:38 Homepage of Shinyuri
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