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Acoustiks Acoustiks is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled (liquid Dnb)' and post your comments here!

Sorry I don't get to review your track other producers. I've been busy lately. Soon I should have some time to take a listen. My apoligies.

Comments? This track I am going to finish, for a FACT.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thankyou. (:
04-06-2008 04:50
DusanN
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I like it. I wasn't expecting much from the beginning, but it gets really good. To elaborate on the beginning, it was just that the lone synth sounded a little too... lone. But after listening past this part, I understand that it needed to contrast from the rest. Good stuff. That's good structuring. The bass is my favourite part of this song. The basslines are very smooth. Nice transitioning with the reverse cymbal, unless I'm mistaking it for something else. The filter on the bassline, during the latter part of the song is a very good touch as well. One of the most important things to me, in drum and bass, is the beat. I think yours needs just a bit more punch. A little more kick to your kicks and pop to your snares will make the song more memorable. This is a very well-put-together track. Nice Work.

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04-06-2008 05:40
Acoustiks Acoustiks is a male
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Thanks for taking the time to listen to it. I do agree on the intro, I realized it on the bus ride home from school...

I'll try some stuff to make the break more interesting. However, I do like the snares as is. I'll make it a bit more punchy, but I just love how they sound for some reason.

And again. Thankyou. Happy
04-06-2008 19:12
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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the mid bass sounds like it is clipping in the intro.
When the intro is finished the main bass sounds too held back. Good melodies, good atmosphere, great vocals and fx stabs. This will be a great track when it is finished.

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04-06-2008 23:58 Homepage of BattleDrone
stickbubbly stickbubbly is a male
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drums sound pretty good in the start. snare seems a bit light. could be heavyer i think.

ya man. i like this tune for sure. wicked bass line. nice vocal.

good melodies.

some issues with your levels. maybe bring down the congas a bit, but the song is really good.

nice work bud. cheers!



05-06-2008 02:44
Vectrex Vectrex is a male
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i really like your track. i normally prefer the bit rougher drum n bass but this is really shaking. again, like with your previous track, i espcially like your drum programming. they really sound great! the bassline has a good rhythm and is pretty cool but actually i would try a cleaner bass (at least for this track)! ;-) keep on going!

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05-06-2008 21:28 Homepage of Vectrex
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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cool summer cruising track ere. like the melodies, the drums sound nice and rolly, definate girl to the floor track which is cool enough for men too!

im not a fan of those hihats when the tune drops tho cos they dont sound crystal like the rest of the track, also a few of the samples sound a bit low res for the track. agree with the comment about the bass, does sound its a little too loud and distorting but not in a good way. anyways i just noticed the bit rate of the track - that might explain the low res sounds, when its finished stick a 360 up ere!

cool choon overall.

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06-06-2008 05:28 Homepage of Shinyuri
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez mate, yeah likin the chilled roller kinda vibe on this one

1:45 bass very nice

agree with the others bass is too distorted, needs to be a bit more controlled and a smoother texture to that sound would probably work better with this arrangement

nice delay on the vocals Big Grin

get it finished!

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06-06-2008 16:57 Homepage of Ketz
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Definitely feelin this one. Reminds me of Roni Size for some reason. Like Shinyuri, I'm not too keen on the high-pitched hi hats. They sound a bit messy and squishy. Plus, they are far too far to the left, imo.

I like the chilled vibes in this. Always good to hear a nice liquid tune with balls, if ya know what I mean.

Good choice of sounds. I'm actually liking the sound of the distorted bassline. I think it adds texture and roughness.

Nice tune mate. Be sure to review other peeps tunes as well tho. Big Grin

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07-06-2008 10:49 Homepage of Tomos
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Verrrry good. I agree with most about the intro, but once it gets started I love it. Where did you get that vocal? Tongue
07-06-2008 10:59
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