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Kinexion 
Producer
Registration Date: 11-05-2004
Posts: 31
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02-06-2008 21:23 |
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Wally D
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 02-06-2008
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The intro is pretty cool but the synth / lead is a bit clowny and underproduced.The bassline is lost a bit in the back and a bit masked by the synth/lead.
The drums are a lil boring.There should be some fills or some change every 16th bar.They should hit a bit harder.
I did like the breakdown in the interlude and love the vocal samples it gives it some flare.I think this track has potential and if some time was spent on the drums and arrangement it could be killer.
Oh,add some automation to the lead and some filter effects.I think that would bump it up a notch as well.
EZ.....Wally D
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02-06-2008 22:32 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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NIce intro intro. Those sound fx remind me of the old 808 State stuff.
The drums are a bit quiet and need a bit more energy in them. That bass sound is a bit of a headfuck to be honest.
Its not a bad tune, I just don't like the bass really. Could do with some more work, but it does have some nice ideas.
ez
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03-06-2008 00:44 |
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Shinyuri
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Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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easy now, like the melody on this one, the synth lead is cool (big fan of synthy sounds) agree with the wally on how it could do with some more edits and automations, etc on it but the idea is there. would like to hear a filter on this one.
yeh as mentioned the drums could do with more punch, and layering, it sounds like you are using basic sounds for them however, there are some sweet little rolls and subtle edits which are very cool, me likes the 1/32 drums.
yeh, the overall track is cool - could do with a few mods ere n there aswell as maybe layering or compression of the drums to give them more punch.
liking this stuff tho, keep at it
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03-06-2008 13:29 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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cool melody.
your drums are pretty thin. maybe some congas or a drum loop might help fatten them up.
hip hop break down sounds good.
cool tune..
cheers!
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05-06-2008 03:02 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Overall, it's not too bad mate. It's got a nice electro, synthy based sound which could be very cool. However, it's lacking punch at the mo. The beats are too simple for my liking. Plus, the bass is too thin and it's too constant. Also, it has some weird panning on it. You need to think about adding some flavours to it such as modulation and layering. It's very one-dimensional right now. But yeah, the basic idea behind the tune is pretty good.
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07-06-2008 11:07 |
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HAMANN
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 27-10-2007
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Electrosounds are cool, but u definitely need to use another snare sample. Its lost and unnoticable. If u want to keep its colour u can always layer with one or two another snares. One of them should have powerful attack. Also i think u could add some type of cymbals on background.
BTW 16t step beat in my view sounds better 
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13-06-2008 09:44 |
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