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Please check out my new track 'metallica - dyers eve (blackened remix)' and post your comments here!!!

ok ok this is the right one deffinitely

kind of a metal meets dnb

comments appreciated


This track has been deleted on the producer's request

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02-06-2008 17:44 Homepage of cynik
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Under normal circumstances a combination of metal and dnb would = for me ... but I'm not feeling this I'm afraid. There's some great speed riffing madness but there's just too many tempo changes, it goes from being way too fast to being too slow and the structure... well, there doesn't appear to be any. Big Grin I know a tune like this could be wicked, but it needs to resemble the structure and feel of a metal tune a bit more, with more build-ups, rock-outs, and more tension. At the mo, this sounds very haphazard to me.

Another thing which I'm not too keen on is the amount of stereo panning you've used. The whole thing is widely panned which I'm guessing means you applied the panning on the master/global channel? If so, I'd deffo think about just applying it to 2 or 3 seperate elements, rather the whole thing - maybe some of synth sounds.

The best part of this tune for me is from 0.38 to 1.50. After that, it kinda loses it's way and the intensity drops.

Like I said, this could be super cool, but it's a little too chaotic right now - even for a Slayer fan like myself. Big Grin

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02-06-2008 18:26 Homepage of Tomos
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whoooaaa - that bit when the beat kiks in! fuk speed! definately 0.38 to 1.50 - roking shit! agree with the tomos that there is a few too many tempo changes in there, but the way u change between em is fukin awesome - mad production skillz. yeh, its a bit chaotic, will have to agree - im one of those stupid ravers who need a constant beat tho, will suit the gabba crowd i rekon. the drums - i love the edits, u must spent fukin ages sorting them out huh? if ur going for a metaly style tho i would like to see more 1/32 drum rolls with all the toms and velocity changes in there. theres a couple of screaming synths that sound a bit odd 4.06 - for example, sound a bit midi like, could do with more effects on them.

panning yeh - a bit too wide, a good thing to do with metal is to look at a metallica gig and see where the players stand on the stage and pan like how they are standing. dunno if it would suit dance tho.

anyways, the thought that went into this awesome, some absolute mental bits and a couple of odd ones.

peace

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02-06-2008 22:53 Homepage of Shinyuri
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cheers

@tomos, youre right, its a metal tune with dnb influences so it doesnt conform in any of the two types of music structurewise.. which is what I was going for. tbh I wanted to get some comment on this since I lost my mind and was not sure where its going.

thanks for your ears Drummer

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02-06-2008 23:55 Homepage of cynik
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Like the intro bro. LOve the sonar drops...

Man that drop is cool... Reckon a bit more midrange squidgy bass would be wicked.

I know what the others are saying about tempo change. Get rid of the bit from 2.00 untill 2.28. But keep the bit around 3 Smile

Love some of the drums, obviously not by Lars!!!

Not sure about the solo, sounds muffled as fuck.

Some nice ideas here. I reckon the bass sound could be better. Bit synthy for my likeing.

Enjoyed Happy

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03-06-2008 00:23
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cheers brutal lucifer

sadly, Lars lost his ways ages ago Frown

anyway, goes without saying that upon performance this should be sung over.

"dear mother, dear father... !!!" Devil

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03-06-2008 00:32 Homepage of cynik
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cheers brutal lucifer

sadly, Lars lost his ways ages ago Frown

anyway, goes without saying that upon performance this should be sung over.

"dear mother, dear father... !!!" Devil



I was singing Wink

Think my neighbours like it aswell. I could hear the dancing next door Wink Or they may have been banging on the wall Devil

Noisey bastard!!! They better keep the noise down, or theres gonna be trouble Mad

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03-06-2008 00:57
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Cool stuff.Love Metallic and DnB,you can't go wrong.

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03-06-2008 02:55 Homepage of Wally D
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well i love Metallica and i love DnB so im sure im gna enjoy this....!!

woah!!! that beat is killer!!! freakin sh*t loads of energy mate! lovin that

yeah on the half speed stuff, its cool but i reckon its almost a bit sudden they way it is - would it be an idea to take the beat out completely for like 8 bars and then drop that half timing in - just for a bit more logical progression?

but i definately see what uv done here - its not a conventional DnB tune, the structure seems to be more metal - focused so im definately givin u top marks for originality!

technically seems like a lot of work has gone into this track - so many ideas, no repetition Bigup

my only critism would be that some of the synths that replace the guitar riffs sound a bit too synthy - could possibly do with a bit more distortion and messin around with

but nvertheless - i have to say im impressed!

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very good track although a little high bpm wize, and the intro drumz a bit too much nice little verb/delay b4 drop tho gs work man. Smile
07-06-2008 19:57 Homepage of Mechanikz
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the intro is nice, lots goin on
I'm liking the drums, kinda Counterstrikey Smile
There seems to be a lot of reverb wash off multiple instruments muddying up the low-mids, some EQ of the wet signal might help.
The half time bit is awesome, definitely in keeping with the Metal genre Big Grin
I really like the uber fast arpeggiating synth, its driving away in the background n brings everything to life but like I say the reverb wash seems to be clouding it a little
Personally I'm not sure about the drop after the tempo changing part, it seems to roll in without much of an entrance, however the occasional sudden drop in tempo straight after a fast passage is awesome! It doesn't seem to be half time either, it keeps in the style of metal for sure Smile

Towards the end I'm not so sure about the constantly changing tempo but I think thats probably just me personally Tongue

Overall I'm likin this track but I think a little re-EQ on some of the parts would help some of the instruments to really stand out Smile

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And while you're at it check out my latest track 'Doldrum' Big Grin

I've been away for a long time and it's some fresh stuff from me and I wanna know what people make of it Smile

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before 2:03 I was like wtf sen Metallica 3 times
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