 stiffer - Your Friend |
stiffer
Producer
Registration Date: 06-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Your Friend' and post your comments here!!!
a little harder than usual. started makin it after returnin from the valve soundsystem in leeds on sunday night so was inspired to make somethin a bit heavier
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29-05-2008 01:35 |
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D2o 
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Registration Date: 30-05-2005
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hmm, that warpy synths sounds wrong when it changes note,
when this drops, it sounds a little like some old BSE stuff,
The beat lacks power though, mostly the snare,
the rides and hats sound like the top end has been boosted too much, sounds very hissy,
i think that maybe the mad kick roll is too much for the drop, its builds it up too much imo.
I like the beats rhythm, and this had me noddin.
not bad squire 
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29-05-2008 12:04 |
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D&Bincane
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Registration Date: 24-05-2008
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DnB may be hard...On a party it gives the room more vibration...and energy to dance like never before.
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29-05-2008 18:54 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The lead from the beginning sounds weird, off tone in itself and damaged in the beginning.
Check your levels, the tune is very silent.
The lead from the beginning ruins the tune somewhat as it is quite far off tone.
Track itself has potential, but the mixdown sounds muffled, squashed and the low end needs more presence.
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29-05-2008 20:51 |
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Shinyuri
myspace.com/shinyuribeats
Registration Date: 05-01-2007
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easy - good ideas in here man, can definately tell you were ravin before you made this one, the energy is there, the main melody is cool, the drum roll sounds ravey. i do 2nd what the others say about the production of it but when thats sorted it will make a badboy track.
i rekon that lead could have a drifferent rythym on the lfo (or is it the filter) now and again to spice it up a little.
with the eqing and the mastering given a few tweaks this`ll b a stomper.
peace
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30-05-2008 09:28 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Deffo agree with Battle. The low and low-mid frequencies just aren't loud enough at the mo. I can hear a little sub in the background but it's much too far back in the mix. Needs to be much more prominent.
There's some good beats edits in there. I've got no real complaints with them, they're very good.
The melodies are ok but they didn't really inspire me that much. They are a bit too repetitive.
Not bad overall, but still needs a few tweaks.
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