drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » spoogie07 - February spoogie07 - February Author Post spoogie07 Producer Registration Date: 20-05-2008 Posts: 13 Please check out my new track 'February' and post your comments here!!! Ok peeps, this is a track i started some time ago, wasnt really feeling it and couldnt get to a stage where i was happy with it so i stoped work on it... Found it in some random file yesterday and thought i may as well upload and see if anyone thinks its worth continuing with??? Who knows? Im sure i'll find out.... Oh i know the levels are all over the place... i got baby twins so have to make tunes through a crap pair of headphones so i dont wake em up.... ( well at least thats my excuse..) lol the things we have to do to make beats aye.... 27-05-2008 20:21 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  The samples are good, but overused. Some chords are off tone in the intro. The levels don't sound all that bad. Seems like you got a nice bunch of loops and played them. This makes the tune very repetitive. You should add some more own edits, make some melodies by yourself, create a buildup to get some tension into the tune,... __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 27-05-2008 23:48 walcor by walcor Registration Date: 14-02-2008 Posts: 140 Helpfulness rating:  auch....some piano keys are off...imo...tho the vibe is good ...in me humble opinion...the master is too quiet...drums are nice...could use some more bass...that trumpet is a nice idea but maybe a better melody ??...but it grows on u...a tweak here and there...this tune has potential... My suggestion, finish it... __ walcor on last.fm walcor on SoundCloud 28-05-2008 13:54 stickbubbly mad man Registration Date: 16-09-2004 Posts: 377 Helpfulness rating:  ya man this tune has potential. i would keep on workin on it for sure. im really diggin the sax riff.. maybe bring it in a bit earlier, the arrangement is good. builds nicely. nice one man! cheers! 29-05-2008 09:02 Tomos Infidel Registration Date: 15-04-2007 Posts: 2,276 Helpfulness rating:  Like the others are saying, this is definitely more like a collection of loops (I have quite a few of them myself!), rather than a proper, original tune. For that reason, I'm not feelin this. You need to think about creating your own melodies and sounds, rather than relying on samples. __ MySpace | Soundcloud | Drumnbass.be | Facebook "It is far better to grasp the Universe as it really is than to persist in delusion, however satisfying and reassuring." Carl Sagan 30-05-2008 18:34 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  so do we get a different tune from u for each month of the year?! lol only kiddin :p another chilled vibe - nice rhythm with the various melodic elemnts, likin the beat on this one too but agree with BD that a few edits / variations would help u get away from the repetitivenes from this love that sax from 2:38! overall what this tune needs is some variation on the beats and some of the melodies - i must be deaf as couldn't spot that off key note that the other guys were alking about! keep workin on this one man definately got potential! __ 31-05-2008 13:17 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » spoogie07 - February