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brucifer brucifer is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Sunday' and post your comments here!!!

Slightly mellow track by me. Nice and easy going...


Done using Reason 3

Please vote and feedback.

All comments appreciated. I will review your tracks in return, provided it's not a remix I'm doing...

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27-05-2008 01:34
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nice and mellow indeed...pretty good intro too..

to some sounds later sound a little phased...could just be me u know

don't really like that bass at 2.40-ish takes the ambience away..imo

overall nice tune....baah that bass ruined it for me ...but like that long synth

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27-05-2008 08:37 Homepage of walcor
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Thanks for listening mate. I'm not keen on the bass either. I put it in as a last minute thing, uploaded the track, listened again and realised it not right... Huh Bad habit of mine... Big Grin


I will have to check your song in a few days. My broadband has run out Mad sorry Frown

I heard the first 2 seconds, then a 15 second wait for the next 2 seconds... Sounded cool, but not really ideal for reviewing. Huh

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27-05-2008 08:47
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aah ur not he only one ....but hope you finish it ....

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27-05-2008 09:00 Homepage of walcor
Shinyuri Shinyuri is a male
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chilled and ravey, me likes. like the bass pad thing, gives a nice warmth to the track. the woman going "ooh" i like it but i dont like it when its played on the higher note - sounds a tiny bit off thats all.

agree with the bass being a bit off. try using the filter Wink - this tune could turn into a pumping wobble that way - i dunno if its the thing u want for it tho cos its all chilled but i rekon it might work on it.

even tho its chilled i rekon it could still be a bit louder and upfront too. the hihats on the drums sound a bit muffled.

anyways, generally good stuff.

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27-05-2008 10:23 Homepage of Shinyuri
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Good mellow vibe, not so much dancefloor stuff though. This could be improved by changing the buildup a bit, the current buildup is quite confusing until approx 3' then it's a nice roller.
pads sound muffled, they would do better with some extra high end. The bass stabs that sound like a didgeridoo also suffer from the same problem.
The vocals tend to get annoying after a while.

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27-05-2008 15:22 Homepage of BattleDrone
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Ah, ya bastards!!!! This song is perfect!!! Big Grin Wink

Does need a bit more work doing. I'm gonna lose the distorted bass. But it does need something else, not quite sure what at the moment... It is a mellow song, not really a dance floor smash or top 10 hit, like my others Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin LOL

Thanks for listening. I will be checking your songs, once my broadband is connected Mad No idea when that will be though. Huh

How is the sound quality? enough base??? Useing a new stereo now...

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27-05-2008 18:08
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Deffo feelin this chilled number. The bass, imo, is actually sounding ok in relation to everything else. However, what I feel you need to do is try and boost the overall mix. Everything is sitting nicely together but, overall, it needs a little boost cos it's sounding a little quiet at the mo.

Beats are very nice. Definite old skool vibe there. But again, they could benefit from being a bit more prominent and punchier.

Nice use of sub bass here. Classic junglist vibe, which I really like.

The background percussion element is a real nice touch. It adds some nice highs to the mix, and gives it more depth.

Cool background pads too, real nice melody.

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27-05-2008 21:54 Homepage of Tomos
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we is the original "DOLLY PARTON" , lol , hey man nice track , some kinda weird eqing here and there , some bass samples that need turning down , but love the ambiance , like it mate , very LTJ dont you think , not sure i like that funny mangled bass sample , its too over used and outta place , IMO , and to long 4 a preview , start to get a bit boring , nice thou , peace !!!!!!!!!
28-05-2008 13:04
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I think Sunday is a really nice drum and bass piece, but at some point the drums started to annoy me. Wednesday would have been a more appropriate name 4 the song... Big Grin Didn't feel any relaxin' sunday vibes in it.

The vocals (or the vocal samples) - I think - were perfect. Also the bass was cool although it has been... uhm... Well, you know, reviewed bad. (I'm finnish so I'm not so good in english) Tongue

The build up had an awesome atmosphere and the 3:19 marker was VERY nice! Pads are also backing up the whole track just the way they should.

I'm not gonna say anything about the eq-ing and stuff, cos I dont know anything about that. Big Grin

The whole thing was just groovy. 4-/5.

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28-05-2008 15:07 Homepage of Puzzle
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chillin. sounds like old school.

drums seem a bit light. maybe fatten up your kick and snare a bit.

lead noise is cool. seems a bit quite though.

good vibes man. nice tune

cheers

29-05-2008 09:07
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nice think old skool pads in the start, maybe a bit dry atm, maybe give it some verb or delay,

beat suits it all too, in keeping with the vibe and sound.

vocal is nice just a little overused imo

that low sound in the break sounds a little off to me.....

its all getting a bit samey after the break, that original pad needs taking out or replacing to change thing up a little.

good start though, looking forward to the finished track Bigup

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29-05-2008 11:46 Homepage of D2o
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Was liking the chilled flow until the bass near the end. It's not for on the dance floor though. Take the bass out and get another element or two in there and you'll have a nice track.
31-05-2008 11:30
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hello bruce hows it goin?! very mellow vibe compared to ur signature dark / moody stuff matey! good to hear sumthin different from you Smile

i like the subtle bass in the start, very chill, beat from 1:33 is cool -rolls along nicely!

i actually like the bass at 2:55, but im not sure how well it fits in this track - maybe slightly moody for this kinda tune? dont worry thats more of a personal taste thing

overall i enjoyed this one, can imagine myself chillin out on a sunday smokin a j and listening to this Big Grin , in terms of suggestions, a few more melodic / synth elements could add to the vibe that you have already created, maybe a few melody changes here and there so its not too repetitive

but very nice stuff brucey! Bigup

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31-05-2008 13:05 Homepage of Ketz
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