hey there, nice intro, nice groove. The kick seems to be too mufled. The drop is too chaotic imo. All the sounds together drown the break which is way too in the backround. The bass is too loud imo and it misses some low end. The EQ side of this track in general is not well. You should concentrate on that some more. The ideas are good. I like the groove and melodies. I somehow dont get your problem with track length. I have no problem uploading my 5 min long track...
Sounds a bit lifeless and muffled overall, but not too bad.
Too bad it is so short, maybe you should lower the bitrate of the mp3 when encoding it from your daw and go for 192kbps or even 160 which still sounds fine.
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really nice chilled out intro. really diggin it. hmm drop is interesting. i dont really like those first few techy stabs too much but the rest of the arrangment is sweet.
cool vibealage coming off of this one! reminds me of driving back muntered from a rave at 7 in the morning (oops, not drive.. i meant get the train mr. policeman
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anyways, the jazzy melodies are sweet as, chilled and laid back, definately agree with the comments about the drums sounding muffled and in the background, eq em and turn em up. tbh im not really feeling the bass, could do with some more edits on maybe the filter or process them more with some more effects. could do with dropping the intro sounds when the tune drops too to add more punch to the drop.
anyways, sort it and repost - this would make a good morning tune.
btw dont worry bout negative comments - it makes me try harder. peace
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Nice everything is nice until the 1.00 drop...that peep sound ...not feelin it..and that prr bass...man u have a really nice superb mellow tune ...real class, but that beep and bass at the drop...man that was weird...imo...
I suggest changing the instruments...defo
remake the drop to sound little more mellow not that hard and ull have a NICE tune and the drum...could use more oomhp and less trance like...other hats and snare...guess they need some brightness...there really back there..imo
and that mp3 ting...if ur using FL I use the interpretation to shrink them!?...
Agree with nearly all the comments so far on this one, especially walcor's. The intro is excellent, vibe wise. The jazzy, mellow melodies would sound fantastic in a smoky, low-lit club/pub in the wee hours of the morning.
The beats need a lot of work tho. They are very thin. There's not enough punch and energy from them.
Like the others have already said, there's enough here to make a really cool, chilled tune. Keep working it on mate, I'm liking your style.
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hello mate, thanx for reviewin my track, here's my review in return..
yep from the start i can already agree with the others that the groove is really cool from the get go,
like the stop - start idea from around 1:17 but i think its almost a bit too broken up, could possibly fill some of those empty bits with sum hihats or other percussion to keep the flow goin?
the actual vibe is kinda jazzy / ambient stuff, im feelin it on a musical level
again, agree with the others that the EQing needs a bit of attention, at points some of the sounds are fighting with each other to be heard.
but overall, really good stuff - keep up the good work mate!
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